Durzan's Discussion Thread

Durzan

Durzan

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Introduction
Hi guys, I'm Durzan, and up till recently I've been a lurker. Let me tell you guys a little bit about myself so you guys have some context as to what I'm like.

Useful Info:
  • I am an English Major.
  • I am on the Autism Spectrum, and also have ADHD.
  • As an aspiring author, I have some talent in writing. I have written quite a few non-erotic short stories, fan-fictions, poems, and so forth... which I've mostly kept to myself and some trusted family members and friends.
  • I suffer from near constant writer's block, and I burn out fairly quickly. I can write reasonably, but its sporadic, unpredictable, and based on a number of factors, including inspiration. This needs to go, or at least get compensated for.
  • Am pretty good about spitballing ideas and refining ideas of others, but have a hard time actually doing writing myself because of a near constant state of writer's block. Also, I burn out fairly quickly. Because of this, I figured that I might actually work better as part of a group rather than working alone all the time.
  • I alternate between meticulous planning and being spontaneous.
  • I also have a general problem writing erotic material in general, even though there is a sizable part of me that wants to. I want to fix this, if nothing else but to broaden my horizons and versatility.
Interests/Preferences/Standards:
  • Rape/Non-Consent, BDSM, Mind Control, Incest, Humiliation/Mortification/Embarrassment (to some extent), ENF, and anything of that nature is a major turn on if written well. Vanilla sex can be entertaining and a turn-on if written well and when bringing something new to the table, but not always to the same degree. Everything else is hit or miss.
  • Gay sex is a major turn off; futa's/dick-girls are a turn-off. Lesbian w/ strap-on is usually also a turn-off; making out and some domination can be hot. Three-way and orgies involving members of both sexes can be a turn-on or a turn-off, again depending on the situation.
  • Group Sex and partner-swapping are okay, depending on the situation.
  • Teens and Young Adults... Big yes, major turn-on... that is my general age group. Old folks/Grannies/Mature/MILFs generally a big nope for me... more often than not its a big turn off.
  • Broad Genres (such as Sci-fi, Comedy, Romance, etc) are all on the table for what I like, not too picky so long as it is interesting and well written (usually).
  • Prefer actual plot, setting, and character development in a story. Sex should be part of the story not simply the entire story itself. Details should be consistent and (relatively) realistic within the context of the story. Mood whiplash is a turn-off if its not handled well. Keep me hooked and interested in more ways than one.
  • Above all, if I am entertained and jacking off without being distracted or losing my suspension of disbelief... well, I'm satisfied and happy.
Favorite Stories and Some Critiques:
  • The Rulebook (Michael's family vacation branch, the closet Psychopath branch, and the Manga enthusiast branches are all awesome and need to be expanded upon)
  • God's Apprentice (The RWBY branches are pretty good, but I wish there was more non-con involved)
  • Game Monster (Nuff said; there's something for everyone in this story)
  • Help! I'm A Teenage Genie! (Shows promise and is kinda fun)
  • Celebrity Slave Cruise (Emma Watson needs more non-con fucking with the MC in that)

Projects:
  • 7 Days of Incest (125+ Chapters, ~2700 Likes, 3 Authors in addition to myself, as of Oct 22nd.)
  • The AIFAverse (AIFAverse being a collaborative shared multiverse project between myself and other authors on my collaboration discord)
  • Untitled AIFAverse Story (Still in early conception)
 
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I am trying to organize a group to help work on 7 Days of Incest alongside me. Anyone willing to help out?

Edit: Feel free to leave feedback or otherwise discuss my stories in this thread. If you wish to help out, you can volunteer in this thread or the appropriate brainstorming thread.
 
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Meine got!

I'm certainly beginning to notice that if you want your story to hit big, make it an incest XD

Good story premise, you did well for your first. Very well in fact, congrats Haha
:)
 
Updates: Finally figured out how to word the credit to Tapdancingfish for the original story this work is based on.

Also finally hit the 50 chapter mark (well, less than that if you discount the "Author Commentary/Announcement" chapters).

On the "Leggings surprise butt-sex route," I finally figured out how to continue onward and managed to get through the sex scene (3 to 4 pages of it), and set up a hook that could lead to either a potential game over or an eventual merging back into the main route... but I still need some work on it. Unfortunately, I am now fresh out of ideas on how to implement it. Could use some suggestions in this thread, the idea's thread, or the comment section.

On the one hand, I really need to insert a game over somewhere soon... as the prologue is supposed to be a sort of tutorial to get readers familar with the mechanics and characters. Neglecting to add a game over would be skimping out on a major game function.

On the other hand, the sex scene should potentially be able to funnel back into the main route... though I am not sure how to make sure it and the other routes have enough in common to where I don't need to write entire swaths of basically duplicate chapters.

Any ideas or suggestions? I haven't gotten very many comments recently.
 
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