Living in Your Sister's Shadow (& other stories by ThreeNipps)

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by ThreeNipps, Jan 27, 2020.

  1. Karyjeta

    Karyjeta Virgin

    I love every single threenips story, but if I could choose I would prioritize liyss. So many opportunities that just started opening up. Im hoping so much that things start going down the impregnation path! Too many fertile pussies to ignore!
     
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  2. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    Yikes at finishing my valentines story on April 19th...

    Onto the next thing. Working on the next House on 13th Street chapter now. I'd promise to have it out tomorrow but my promises on when something will be published tend to fall short. I'm no Eve.

    I moved the next LIYSS chapter up a spot in the queue. I'm going to publish a Characters chapter too but I'll probably do that after one with actual content. People would get all excited for a new chapter and just be disappointed that it was just character info and stuff like that lol

    Updated queue:
    1. House on 13th Street (SSS)
    2. Frank Thompson (Affection Multiplier)
    3. LIYSS
    4. The Girls Need Some Sun


    I'd like some feedback from you guys on LIYSS. Essentially Part 1 of each storyline will end when Jack loses his virginity to each of the main characters. Lily's storyline is done. Alice's still has some fun left before it ends probably in a couple of chapters. I'll be working on that next. I'd like to wrap up all four part ones (excluding Ruth because it's too much to get into right now) before starting part 2 in the Lily storyline. So my question is this: After I finish p1 of the Alice storyline, which one would you like me to do next? Olivia or Mandy?
     
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  3. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Jeez that's a tough call. It will all be fun but I think I *slightly* lean towards Olivia, but mainly because for me the Mandy storyline is so wrapped up with Lily that I'm not sure I can handle a branch where Jack and Mandy get serious and Lily is off to the side lol.

    Olivia, and how Alice fits in, is very interesting to me even though I'm not wild about the cheating aspect of it. Of course, what she's already done with the private yoga lessons has 100% meant being unfaithful to her lame husband anyway, but for Jack to get even more would mean that the unpleasant infidelity discussion would have to happen. And yeah I don't *love* that stuff but I do love bit emotional storytelling and characters having difficult conversations about their feelings and the consequences of their actions so sign me up!
     
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  4. Yeller

    Yeller Virgin

    I agree with Wilparu on this one, I vote Olivia and its basically the same reasons just his has more words than mine.
     
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  5. Conan The Librarian

    Conan The Librarian Really Experienced

    I think I have read all of your stories. Long time fan. You always develop such believable characters and manage to stick a nice balance between smut and buildup. My favourite story by far was the main branch of Spooky Scary Sisters, I just love the dynamic between the protagonist and the Abigail/Luna duo, it was just magical. It always bring sorrow to my heart that the story was left unfinished. Anyway, good stuff.
     
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  6. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    In the past ThreeNipps has talked about returning to SSS for next Halloween, and I *really* hope he does. :)
    I love all his stories too, but I think this branch may narrowly be the most exciting to me. It has the extra drama of supernatural danger and some real risk in addition to the regular great characters and scenarios that ThreeNipps does so well.

    As always: PROTECT CEDRIC AND LUNA AT ALL COSTS ;)
    (also the Mom. And hell Abigail too, even though she's scary af right now)
     
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  7. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    New SSS chapter posted. Queue also updated. New chapter for my branch in the Affection Multiplier is up next. It's long overdue, I know. Tomorrow I'll probably outline and write a very rough draft. I also need to catch up on reading some of the other threads in the story. If you haven't already, I highly recommend exploring some of the content that other writer's have contributed to it. Peace :cool:
     
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  8. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    New LIYSS chapter posted. I'm doing a bad job at following the queue. Oh well. Feels good to be writing again.
     
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  9. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    Queue updated

    1. LIYSS - Mom branch
    2. Affection Multiplier
     
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  10. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    Spent the day editing some LIYSS chapters. Some stuff was added but nothing significant. Somehow I had forgotten about the clothes situation in some of the more recent mom chapters. One chapter she's got all of this lingerie on and then she's magically naked all of a sudden. There was some sloppy writing. Pretty big oversight but should be fixed now. Also did some long term planning and outlining. I really wish that I had the mental fortitude to grind out a bunch of chapters.

    It's almost July so sometime in the next month there will be a new "Christmas in July" chapter in "Onesies for the Girls." It will be one long chapter at the end of the main Rose storyline that goes over the whole family being locked down in quarantine during the pandemic. Maybe Rose won't be going to school in the fall after all? It's gonna be a one off chapter. I'll pick the story up full time in December. Still a lot of fun to be had with Rachel and Deb.

    At some point I'm going to contribute to wilparu's Summer Collection. I have a half baked idea that I like but I just want to focus on my current stuff for now. I might write it later this summer or next summer. Not sure.

    A new chapter in my Affection Multiplier branch is up next. I've got some free time so I'll start working on it tomorrow. Frank's back home and his eyes are set on Ava.

    Not sure beyond that. I might do a Girls need some sun chapter and then return to LIYSS to finish part one of the Mom storyline. One chapter left for that. Then, as mentioned earlier in this thread, I'll shift to Olivia or Mandy.
     
  11. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    SSS chapter posted. Working on Affection Multiplier chapter next. I'm hoping that I'll have more free time this fall. We'll see.

    This October I'm going to try to get a lot done on SSS. Key word there is try. I'll update the Author Notes chapter sometime this week hopefully
     
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  12. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Loved the SSS chapter, and I saw this which gave me a slight Luna and Cedric vibe. Not sure if the hair matches Cedric's, but maybe Luna gets him to dye it once too for fun ;)
    Maybe after the happy ending the twins still have some interesting tastes as a result of Abigail and whatever other entities are messing with them?

    [​IMG]
     
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  13. Spookys

    Spookys Virgin

    I've recently started reading the SSS story again and I just came across a picture I feel like would be very fitting for Luna.
    I'm glad to see you are back to writing some awesome chapters again ThreeNipps and hope for much more to come!
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  14. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Nice! I wonder just how 'goth' Luna is. We know she has dyed her hair, wears black, and lots of pale makeup. So that pic might be pretty accurate.
    Small but nicely sized breasts too. :D I can even imagine she's mock rolling her eyes at something Cedric just said. Something silly she secretly loves to hear.
     
  15. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    Big fan of goth girls. I'll eventually add one to my story in the Affection Multiplier. She'll be a coworker of Frank.
     
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  16. ThreeNipps

    ThreeNipps Experienced

    New chapter in Onesies for the Girls posted. December is here so that means...

    December - (1) Onesies for the girls (Rachel) is my main focus. I'd really like to catch that path up to Rose's. That's kind of the goal. Deb will be Dec 2021

    If possible, I'd also like to publish at least one chapter in all of my other stories. A new (2) LIYSS chapter is way overdue.

    My story in the (3) Affection Multiplier is very popular so that will probably come next

    One thing that has really been bothering me lately is the fact that (4) The Girls Need Some Sun has virtually no sex in it. Sure, there are sexually charged moments and whatnot but no actual payoff. I've been thinking about just writing on the slave path and sticking with that. This is more of a long term thing that I'll work on through the first half of next year. I need to get it to at least the first sex scene.

    I didn't make it quite as far as I had hoped in (5) The House on 13th Street. I need to at least resolve the scene I left it at

    In February I'll return to my story in the Valentines Day collection. That will work as more of a yearly update type situation and shouldn't be more than just a few chapters.


    Cliffs on plans for the next few months: Continue making progress with already published stories and resist the urge to start/take on more projects.
     
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  17. NaughtyOppa

    NaughtyOppa Experienced

    For my part, the slave path in TGNSS is really hot.
     
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  18. Lt. Dusk

    Lt. Dusk Virgin

    4DAA6116-4039-49AC-A22D-6946EB60FD28.jpeg I found a picture that almost matches the description of bellatrix in TAM
     
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  19. Lt. Dusk

    Lt. Dusk Virgin

    30F49EB9-D0BB-4BB0-82C0-0E1C52B92C4B.jpeg Also a potential picture for Faith
     
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  20. elnico

    elnico Virgin

    Massive fan of the story! Hope it continues!