A couple ideas that I had were to build on the existing jealousy between Logan, Victoria and Scarlett. If Victoria and Trent walk away together, even if they don't do anything, I'm sure Logan's imagination would go wild enough for him to make a snap or impulsive decision with a girl. He could go after Lisa, or maybe he feels confident or reckless enough to go after Sharon for a meaningless fling that forces Scarlett to maybe intervene. Could be a start to a hot threesome scene. Maybe Vicky and Trent were just having a private talk, and she ends up finding Logan fooling around with someone, and secretly starts touching herself. All these different scenes could branch off with people catching them, for example, maybe Heather bumps into Vicky when she and Andrew try to find some privacy. Imagine the awkwardness between Logan and Vicky after that encounter, lol.
Those are all interesting ideas! I plan on doing something kinda like you said. Victoria and Trent end up overhearing Brandon and Ashley having sex and that leads to some steamy times. Not full-blown sex, but Trent will take advantage of the moment a bit. Logan will have some fun, hot, and awkward moments the entire time they are on the Falls, should be fun, lol.
We've got a nice momentum going with four threads (mine, JohnLocke4, PhoenixAuthor, and now Porksword), but everyone who wants to add one is welcome to do so, and the readers too, you're all welcome at the story.
So I finally got around to reverse image searching Scarlett. I've always thought her picture was a bit goofy looking, and I'm convinced that her model sucking her lower lip in is doing her a disservice. Scarlett's model looks so much better in almost every other pic of her, haha
It's Lili Reinhart from Riverdale, lol. I used that picture because I wanted to put up one where she was wearing something in leather.
So, what are our thoughts regarding action scenes? I always tend to include some in my threads that actually go somewhere, but that has been somewhat divisive amidst readers in the past, a few of them liked and for others it was a dealbreaker.
I'm not apposed to action scenes on principle, but I think they definitely have to add to the story. I don't see a point of action for action's sake, especially if it introduces a jarring change of tone for no pay-off. Like, raunchy sex drama > adrenaline inducing action > raunchy sexy drama is a wild tonal shift that doesn't really add/change anything enough to warrant it.
That's what I'm concerned about, how it's gonna be received. My plan is that those action scenes come as the culmination of the mystery plot I've been slowly introducing into my thread. It looks good in my planning, but one never knows how others are gonna see it, lol.
Alright, for those that are caught up with my thread, you know that I'm doing a huge scene/scenes with several characters at Zaffre Falls. Would anyone terribly mind if I showed everything under Logan, Grace, Scarlett, and Heather's perspectives only? It's just that, I'm seeing those as the main characters of the thread and trying to write inconsequential scenes like Kurt hitting on girls or the athletes chatting about girls seem to be creating chains in my hands, lol. I'm thinking that scenes that don't have to do with any of those four characters or the wider plot aren't turning up fun to write, plus, I kinda want the story to be more dynamic and easier to write as well.
You'll get no complaints from me. If you write every little inconsequential action, you'll be there for weeks. I wonder who'll be the one to stumble into Vicky and Trent. I really like Lisa, so I'm half hoping it's Logan
That's something I'm deciding as well. I can say it won't be Logan, though. It'd be a big setback for him and he'll have more important things to worry about, so it'll likely be one of the girls. He already had his defeat moment with Sharon. Or I might write that scene under Victoria's perspective if none of the others fit well into the scene. Between all the versions of the story, I wrote a lot of stuff already, and writing Kurt hitting on girls and meaningless conversations between side characters are something that I've done several times over the years, so it's feeling quite repetitive for me while I'm working on my next chapter. I want to advance on the plot soon.
Of course. There's no point in writing things that don't add anything to the story. You could probably get away with a few throw-away lines about what the others are doing, considering they are minor characters.
Yeah, that's my plan. Besides evolving the main story for the protagonists, I'm gonna use the others only to set up possible future storylines.
You know, I was thinking about this the other day. We've seen Ashley break up with Brandon and find new love a umber of times now, but I don't think we've really seen her "go wild" yet. By that, I mean branching out into multiple partners without really looking to move on to a new boyfriend or to find a new love right away. I was thinking about doing that in my thread, but it doesn't really fit the setting too well. As for your original question, I don't really have a preference either way. I really like all the girls you've already attached to Logan, so adding Ashley to the mix might get things bloated. If you're looking to move her on to another guy, then I guess I'm up for it.
Seeing Ashley go wild 'Hannah-style' sounds like a cool plot for someone to pursue, lol. Though I think it'd be better in a story that takes place in Copper Rocks, as she has infinite possibilities for guys there. For my thread, I was toying the other day with the possibility of Ashley moving on to that new guy from the football team, Scott. Kinda, she starts trying to find him a girlfriend, and then, when she's no longer dating Brandon for some reason, she becomes that girlfriend herself when we find out that Scott liked her or something. After that, I don't know, lol. All my ideas for after they are together also works if she stays with Brandon, so I'm not sure if it's worth the trouble, lol. Granted, part of the readers don't like Brandon, so they might find Ashley's adventures with Scott more enjoyable, I don't know.
I loved seeing it too. Building the story and the lore, one brick at a time, it'll have a payoff in the end.
So I'm curious, when it comes to the characters, specifically the girls, who are peoples favourites in the sense you want to see them have sex/get fucked or at least involved in some activity like oral. Who are your top 3, and who would you like to see partnered with them, and if you have anything in particular for them to do what is it, like a position, toys or ropes, being watched etc?
