Sorry, I guess I wasn't being clear. The point about how Bill likely knows about the man, means that you can provide colour to the scene through...
I think that in the case of dialogue, making it easy for the reader to comprehend outweighs making the section look longer. But either way, you...
@Trugbild Heh, no problem, I totally understand. Still, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment none the less. So thank you. :D
Here's some feedback on your writing as promised. Please keep in mind that I'm no writing expert, so feel free to take my comments and suggestions...
@Beeble42 & @Trugbild Thanks! I really appreciate the suggestions! @Beeble42 , I use word to write in before posting as well. It sounds like...
Heh, thanks. It's a pet peeve of mine too when a story line just ends up dangling, especially when it ends just as it's getting interesting....
Hi, I've been writing a storyline within: Tifa and the Slave Materia. The stuff I've written starts here: Tifa Panics, She Tries to Get Rid of...
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