I have honestly never seen someone turn Anon-kun against themselves that quickly. Good work
There's a lot of other sites for writing that heal a lot of these issues. Fiction.live and Questionable Questing come to mind
I'm trying to go for a mixture of things to test my writing against. The tentacle monster thing is basically just there for those looking for...
I'm looking for feedback on my story Tales of the Forest. I'm planning on making a few different stories within it rather than just sticking to...
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