After five chapters, I'm feeling decently good with how it has gone. The story and characters have surprised me - I definitely didn't see it going...
Thanks for the feedback! I agree I'm not consistent at describing her emotions, I'll work on improving that.
I've been writing this story for about a month now, focusing on an episodic structure because my last story became very unwieldy once it was ~50...
I kinda wrote myself into a dead end in my other paths, so I went back and wrote a path that is more grounded and focused on humiliation....
Since I last posted, I've updated the story with a lot of chapters and scenarios. I'm wondering if it's better to continue building this...
Having more interaction with surrounding people is a great suggestion. When I'm reading stories, I don't like it when the author spends more time...
Hi everyone, Link to the story I started writing this to get out of writer's block. It went in a direction I didn't fully expect, though I'm...
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