raziel83
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raziel83

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My chapters are getting a good (for me) amount of likes and I still have more ideas. ...But not much time. Aug 4, 2023

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    1. raziel83
      raziel83
      My chapters are getting a good (for me) amount of likes and I still have more ideas. ...But not much time.
    2. raziel83
      raziel83
      Occasionally writers refer to breasts as "gravity defying." I need a scifi story to mention someone using anti-grav module just for that.
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      3. Impregmaniac
        Impregmaniac
        I've just had the worst mental image. A woman with breasts that defy gravity too much and she ends up floating away by her chest.
        Jun 17, 2023
      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        Hmmmm... A Dominatrix themed SCIFI villain with anti-grav holding up her enormous breasts. Good guy defeats her by hacking the anti-grav modules and making her float up to the ceiling.
        Jun 17, 2023
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      5. raziel83
        raziel83
        ...Or if she is a psyker/Sith Lady, she was using force/psychics to keep her breasts perky, and when she is too tired from fighting, the breasts start to sag. Also, one of the less used reasons for how someone manages to fight in high-heels is "she is using the force" to do so.
        Jun 17, 2023
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    3. raziel83
      raziel83
      Waiting for a few chapters to pass review. Also stuck on an idea that I can't quite figure out.
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        Wanted to do a bit of gradual and slow corruption on a character who was turned into an incubus. Trying to figure out the best way for it. As in, what limits would they set for themselves and how their corruptor would make the cross the limits, one by one.
        Apr 30, 2023
      3. Impregmaniac
        Impregmaniac
        Interesting.

        If I may, I suggest thinking in terms of "Do the Ends justify the Means?" or "Picking the lesser of Two Evils".
        Apr 30, 2023
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      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        Well, at least the main advantage in CHYOA is that when I'm stuck on one idea, I can write something else.
        May 1, 2023
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    4. raziel83
      raziel83
      The risk of getting caught makes a story really hot. But porn films that do this are more of comedic "are they blind?" type... Funny though.
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        I mean, people have some fetishes that just can't be done IRL in any safe (or ethical) way but can be explored through stories or roleplay without any harm for example. Cheating and incest for example.
        Mar 26, 2023
      4. AlexandraS90
        AlexandraS90
        I like that one where Daisy Taylor's mother's got dementia and she has sex in front of her on Thanksgiving with that guy.
        Mar 26, 2023
      5. raziel83
        raziel83
        Sometimes I want to watch a funny porn vid so I don't completely oppose the less plausible or less serious vids. But I have trouble finding porn that would take this particular idea and go the serious route (possibly because it is a bit darker one.) Maybe those are behind a paywall.
        Mar 27, 2023
    5. raziel83
      raziel83
      If I wasn't doing this for free, I would be more conflicted when something I wrote on whim gets more likes than the stuff I really enjoy.
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        Point was that if this was a paying job, I'd be tempted to "follow the money" and ruin my artistic whatchamacallit. Now it doesn't really matter much.
        Mar 14, 2023
      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        Yeah, some chapters just take off and it's like "Guess I'm writing this kink now."
        Mar 15, 2023
      4. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Can confirm, readers are super weird sometimes!
        Mar 17, 2023
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    6. raziel83
      raziel83
      Managed some writing after I got inspiration. Still more ideas unwritten, but I'm not sure if I should start a new story just for them.
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    7. raziel83
      raziel83
      Someone went through a story and liked pretty much every chapter I had written. That's a nice rush to see in notifications.
      1. merkros
        merkros
        If only we could find some way to grind up that feeling into a fine powder and sell it on the back market. We'd make a fortune!
        Dec 3, 2022
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    8. raziel83
      raziel83
      Welp, I wrote a lot today. Now lets see if the chapters go through review and if I can finish the remaining ideas I have.
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      2. Warden-Yarn15
        Warden-Yarn15
        Any recovered chapters from the laptop spill?
        Nov 11, 2022
      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        Yeah, I wasn't typing when the spill happened so everything unfinished was saved as a draft.
        Nov 11, 2022
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    9. raziel83
      raziel83
      I *was* going to finish and publish another page tonight. Then I spilled my drink on my laptop. Welp.
    10. raziel83
      raziel83
      Whee! Got a couple threads written and will do a few more when I get the time.
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    11. raziel83
      raziel83
      Trying to make yet another comeback. Maybe I'll make more than one thread this time. :)
      1. TheDespaxas
        TheDespaxas
        you don't need tons of threads , sometimes just a very good one is sufficient.
        good luck, good writing.
        Aug 19, 2017
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        Let's be honest here. Quality is beyond my means. Quantity at least is achievable.
        Aug 21, 2017
    12. raziel83
      raziel83
      Wrote a few new threads after another of my long pauses. Was fun actually.
    13. raziel83
      raziel83
      Hm... Both a story (which I had added to recently) and the creater appear to be gone. That's a pity.
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      2. Cr4ck
        Cr4ck
        The same author also published a story called "Futa Contagion" less then 7 hours ago and already deleted it :/ Unfortunate indeed
        May 29, 2017
      3. chris_brown
        chris_brown
        i know,hes shown up here on different IDs only to delete them a short time later,ive told him his writing is good,but he seems as if hes afraid of any criticism or critique of his work
        May 29, 2017
      4. LizardGod
        LizardGod
        well he seems to be back again.
        Jun 4, 2017
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    14. raziel83
      raziel83
      I have an idea for a story. Rather dark one to be honest. But I'm not sure how to write it or where the publish it even.
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      2. DoAdventures
        DoAdventures
        Send me a pm and I can assist unless someone has already helped you
        May 26, 2017
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      3. Nemo of Utopia
        Nemo of Utopia
        Let it simmer, figure out what's wrong and how to fix it.
        May 26, 2017
      4. LizardGod
        LizardGod
        well "dark" can mean a lot of things. Would be curious to know what makes it so dark
        May 26, 2017
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    15. raziel83
      raziel83
      Trying to write again after a long break but I keep getting stuck for one reason or another.
      1. chris_brown
        chris_brown
        if ure having writers block,maybe i can help
        Dec 22, 2016
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