raziel83

I've just had the worst mental image. A woman with breasts that defy gravity too much and she ends up floating away by her chest.

Hmmmm... A Dominatrix themed SCIFI villain with anti-grav holding up her enormous breasts. Good guy defeats her by hacking the anti-grav modules and making her float up to the ceiling.

...Or if she is a psyker/Sith Lady, she was using force/psychics to keep her breasts perky, and when she is too tired from fighting, the breasts start to sag. Also, one of the less used reasons for how someone manages to fight in high-heels is "she is using the force" to do so.

Wanted to do a bit of gradual and slow corruption on a character who was turned into an incubus. Trying to figure out the best way for it. As in, what limits would they set for themselves and how their corruptor would make the cross the limits, one by one.

Interesting.

If I may, I suggest thinking in terms of "Do the Ends justify the Means?" or "Picking the lesser of Two Evils".

Well, at least the main advantage in CHYOA is that when I'm stuck on one idea, I can write something else.

I mean, people have some fetishes that just can't be done IRL in any safe (or ethical) way but can be explored through stories or roleplay without any harm for example. Cheating and incest for example.

I like that one where Daisy Taylor's mother's got dementia and she has sex in front of her on Thanksgiving with that guy.

Sometimes I want to watch a funny porn vid so I don't completely oppose the less plausible or less serious vids. But I have trouble finding porn that would take this particular idea and go the serious route (possibly because it is a bit darker one.) Maybe those are behind a paywall.

Point was that if this was a paying job, I'd be tempted to "follow the money" and ruin my artistic whatchamacallit. Now it doesn't really matter much.

Yeah, some chapters just take off and it's like "Guess I'm writing this kink now."

Can confirm, readers are super weird sometimes!

If only we could find some way to grind up that feeling into a fine powder and sell it on the back market. We'd make a fortune!

Any recovered chapters from the laptop spill?

Yeah, I wasn't typing when the spill happened so everything unfinished was saved as a draft.

you don't need tons of threads , sometimes just a very good one is sufficient.
good luck, good writing.

Let's be honest here. Quality is beyond my means. Quantity at least is achievable.

The same author also published a story called "Futa Contagion" less then 7 hours ago and already deleted it :/ Unfortunate indeed

i know,hes shown up here on different IDs only to delete them a short time later,ive told him his writing is good,but he seems as if hes afraid of any criticism or critique of his work

well he seems to be back again.

Send me a pm and I can assist unless someone has already helped you

Let it simmer, figure out what's wrong and how to fix it.

well "dark" can mean a lot of things. Would be curious to know what makes it so dark

if ure having writers block,maybe i can help