DOOMED

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Aug 10, 2024.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Well, there is the fact that it's a bit slower-paced in that I don't have her one her knees sucking a random cock within five chapters.
     
  2. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Yeah, I suppose that could be a factor. But I like the slow build-up to corruption, as we've discussed in the past. It makes the pay-off more weighty.
     
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