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  1. Nemo of Utopia
    Nemo of Utopia
    Try something well outside your normal comfort zone.
    Mar 20, 2018
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  2. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    I have - I thought it was going well but have put it on the back burner for the moment
    Mar 20, 2018
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  3. mindtheMILF
    mindtheMILF
    Try something well outside your normal comfort zone again. Never hurts to have another idea in that zone.
    Mar 20, 2018
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  4. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    Well I've tried to go down a route of Alice in wonderland (my take on it) lots of interesting ways I can take it but feel it would only be me that understood it :) couple of chapters in and the confusion has already set in with trying to create a world that we all know but with a Grimm spin
    Mar 20, 2018
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  5. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    Then got a couple of chapters into a strange one (Thanks to gene.sis) and things started to go well but again reached a stage of stagnation :(
    Mar 20, 2018
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  6. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    Then began work on an asylum one - reaching at the sucker punch theme but it all got lost.
    Mar 20, 2018
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  7. Nemo of Utopia
    Nemo of Utopia
    Ok, if you've tried outside your comfort zone and gotten nowhere, see if those stories have anything in common other than being outside the comfort zone, and try again, eschewing that(/those) common element(s). If all they have in common is being outside your comfort zone and written by you, then it is time to return to the comfort zone.
    Mar 20, 2018
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  8. Nemo of Utopia
    Nemo of Utopia
    Just based on a quick glance at the listed ideas I note that they all seem to feature hallucination/psychedelic/dream-image/insanity themes, perhaps that's the common element that's giving you trouble?
    Mar 20, 2018
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  9. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    Yes it's the mood I've been in but obviously not enough, or don't have the imagination for it.....

    I'm tempted to do another Jessica’s Choices as I like the little universe I've built with her but I would also like to finish one arrghhhhhh!!! Lots of balls in the air
    Mar 20, 2018
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  10. gene.sis
    gene.sis
    What do you want to write about? New story? Addition?
    Mar 20, 2018
  11. gscmar64
    gscmar64
    May i suggest that you try to write something Where Jessica isn't abused. Say an infatuation and eventual catching of a love interest in High school before you turned her life into a living hell! Please for her sake let her know some type of happiness!
    Mar 21, 2018
  12. DoAdventures
    DoAdventures
    Although I agree with trying to write a happier tale of Jessica, I started the stories with her young, I can't really go much further back and could change the older stories? But I agree and has been something that I've thought about.

    Suppose I could write another story into collection? Where it all began? Then have the last chapter lead into the first?
    Mar 22, 2018