Comments on Profile Post by Tjf

Probably on a drug called "Horny". I hear it it awakens your second head, sadly that head doesn't have a brain.

To be fair, in a non-sex scene, or maybe aftercare, I could easily see a couple cuddling and one playfully nibbling at the others neck in affection.

Plus, I've seen people do that before (ever heard of a hickey?) and I think certain animals bite their partner's neck when mating as a sign of dominance or something like that.

Hey. In context it worked perfectly. When I RP in private it doesn't stop on nibbling however.

Besides just imagine the sort of nibble when you nip someone and then suck the skin up, leaving a hickey. That's some peak pure desire, right there.

For a more serious answer, I think Tjf's problem with the sentence is redundancy. With the "nape of her neck" part.

Yes.

The issue I had was the redundancy. And the alliteration. Alliteration is never sexy.

Maybe you were not thinking with your head? :)
Out of curiosity, how would you write it now?

Trust me, someone somewhere somehow has an alliteration fetish. Also, sometimes eloquence adds to sex. Usually it's forcibly removing the eloquence via toe-curling orgasms that's hot, but the fancy vocabulary has some merit in and of itself.

Also, I didn't notice until you mentioned it.