raziel83

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Idea being that the daughter doesn't remember what happens while the succubus takes over her body and the father has to regularly fuck the succubus to remain in control. The succubus plays into incest kink and slowly corrupts the daughter, with plans to have the father and daughter have sex while she is not controlling the daughter as this would break the spell binding her. Or something like that.

Sounds like a good setup. What about the wife, what's she doing during all of this?

Undecided. If the wife is simply around, then the other characters would have to tiptoe around her, which adds to tension. If she gets involved, it could be because the succubus helps (or is forced to help) by making her more subservient to the husband. It would be a story about power dynamics that change as the husband and the succubus try to gain total control over the other. T

Exactly, I tried starting again but I can't do it 100% the same and now I'm suddenly stuck thinking about a different way to handle the chapter...

Yeah, I would strongly recommend using a program like word instead and then just copy it over. Writing directly in the editor is risky

I have considered that before, but usually my net has been stable so I haven't had issues like this. This is a new problem that I haven't managed to fix.

If you're anything like me, you'll start working on a brand new idea in a couple of days.

See, Freeuse kink has potential, but it seems like too much of it is just "what if women weren't allowed to say no to me, a horny guy?" instead of exploring other ways it could work.

Can't you just write one yourself?

In theory I could, but I was just wondering if there isn't one already. Also, I am already writing a fanfic and want that finished before starting another project.

Sounds like you need idea #5. ;)

...Now there is a fifth idea. Dangit.

Still blocked? Six! Keep coming up with ideas until you get one that makes you want to write. That's how you know you've got a really good one. :)

God that really is a mood

You can't overuse the idea or it becomes too cheap and easy. And you need some buildup (like the monster having pheromones or aura that excites people) but used sparingly it has made some hot scenes in a few stories I recall.

What's the naame of the manga?

"Succubus Tamer no Isekai Musou" so it is a bit on the nose as is the trend nowadays.

(for some reason, while replies on profile can be long, the original post I had to shorten a few times to make it fit.)

Issues that can be easily solved by using "porn-logic"
Why would Protoss or Zerg even be able to fuck humans? Because it's porn.
Issues that need actual justification within story:
Sharp claws on Zerg and those huge nails on Protoss. These will cause complications until a human partner complains and demands to do a pedicure for safer fingering.

Protoss as a race has never been prolific to the point where the Xel'Naga had to give them technology to increase their population growth
Perhaps some protoss splinter group discover that Terran/Protoss hybrids reproduce more quickly "the old way" than whatever way protoss/protoss reproduce
Zerg sex would be harder since Zerg are scary and full of teethCould be a long con or something to do with primal zerg

Zerg related stories would probably be mainly about non-con and mind control. Perhaps with Zergs "infesting" Terrans in a more sexual manner, or straight up monster-fucking with the Zerg as the monster.

Must be all that student debt, I dunno. I am not an american xd

We are talking about all cute virgins~
But to be honest I find the idea of dragon using magic to transform all their victims into cute, young virgins, very hot.
Wanna stay male? Better put up a good fight and you just might be allowed to pick, heheheh!~

I remembered that there was some porn game about a dragon defiling/devouring a countryside. Defiler Wings, it is called. Unfortunately it seems the English translation of the game stopped at some point and newest version is either Russian or (very badly) machine translated.

I think my main issue with determining the character is that I don't like "hub" stories. I would like a story to focus on one or just few main characters and to have an actual concept that you start from. So if I do this, I'd like to first decide on what type of dragon the story is about and then let things branch off on their "adventure."

...went from "every arrogant tech bro is talking about them" to "oh look, it's worthless" so quickly. Have the villain harp on and on about how much they accomplished ina short time and then use these goods to start designing and building a mind control device to start their harem of mind slaves and worker drones.

Ah, yes, if that's your goal, then someone who's very obviously a scammer probably works better than someone who's merely debatably one.
I like what you're setting up here! Someone who insists they're doing Good, but who in reality is only after fulfilling their own twisted fantasies. Throw in a bit of unreliable narration and you're off to the races.

The idea was to go for the humour / mind control themes and have a young main character (insufferable teen genious type) who starts to build their criminal empire. Maybe some mishaps with mind control chemicals or devices, maybe have some fun with how the MC converts the women he lusted for into his sex slaves but then he is the one who is inexperienced and doesn't know what to actually do other than imitate porn.

I've just had the worst mental image. A woman with breasts that defy gravity too much and she ends up floating away by her chest.

Hmmmm... A Dominatrix themed SCIFI villain with anti-grav holding up her enormous breasts. Good guy defeats her by hacking the anti-grav modules and making her float up to the ceiling.

...Or if she is a psyker/Sith Lady, she was using force/psychics to keep her breasts perky, and when she is too tired from fighting, the breasts start to sag. Also, one of the less used reasons for how someone manages to fight in high-heels is "she is using the force" to do so.

Wanted to do a bit of gradual and slow corruption on a character who was turned into an incubus. Trying to figure out the best way for it. As in, what limits would they set for themselves and how their corruptor would make the cross the limits, one by one.

Interesting.

If I may, I suggest thinking in terms of "Do the Ends justify the Means?" or "Picking the lesser of Two Evils".

Well, at least the main advantage in CHYOA is that when I'm stuck on one idea, I can write something else.

I mean, people have some fetishes that just can't be done IRL in any safe (or ethical) way but can be explored through stories or roleplay without any harm for example. Cheating and incest for example.

I like that one where Daisy Taylor's mother's got dementia and she has sex in front of her on Thanksgiving with that guy.

Sometimes I want to watch a funny porn vid so I don't completely oppose the less plausible or less serious vids. But I have trouble finding porn that would take this particular idea and go the serious route (possibly because it is a bit darker one.) Maybe those are behind a paywall.

Point was that if this was a paying job, I'd be tempted to "follow the money" and ruin my artistic whatchamacallit. Now it doesn't really matter much.

Yeah, some chapters just take off and it's like "Guess I'm writing this kink now."

Can confirm, readers are super weird sometimes!