DoAdventures

My distractions often go like this:
I'm writing and think about sex.
Hmm... what does this sex look like?
*Google*
Oh my. That sex looks AWESOME.
*is spent*

^What He Said...^

From what I read so far it playing out just like the beginning of any of the video games do! With logical action sequences!

I'm guessing that's a good thing?

It is doing alright at the moment though I think :)

That can be a difficult task.
Maybe draft it as notes or easy sentences, refine it as much as possible and let someone have a look at it...

Just put some notes in the following thread if you have any ideas?

https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/writing-a-fight-scene.1363/

great to hear, looking forwards to reading more of jessica's adventures!

Re-write and go back at it once more.

Think I have a good idea, just need to execute it - sounds great in my head though

Ohmibod chapter is up.... Lots of potential here

Facebook seems to have blown up, I don't think I have this many real friends :) so many requests

No, however it does sound like a great idea to help spread the word. I have stumbled amongst users who do have tumblr accounts and maybe a tweet or two from users.

Doadventures on Facebook if you want to add me

Only my email, dirtylittlemestorytime at gmail dot com.

Agreed, that was my favourite to write so far

Carefully you might get some one peeking

I don't don't mind if they see, it's how I got speaking to a lovely girl before

join the club! that's why I limit myself to one hour before bed to read!

after going through my notifications was read "Jailbait" the reason you got nothing done! if so i don't feel that bad then! Jessica's adventures kept me from writing many times so payback!

Yes it was all your fault

Speaking of which - I'd like some help with Dust. I want to contribute, but there's not enough information for me to get started.

I concure with GenericEditor168. Some more information and Dust can easily be a great story.

I'll be honest I intentionally left out detail to see how readers and authors would interpret the story and their choices, building it around what they envisaged but that didn't work :)

Some good chapters just like we had to miss from you being away!

All users have become slaves to the Robots.

Think I've got a beginnings of a good story to start really working on focusing all my time on - Crime Thriller and of course Jessica :)

I too am nearing posting a large story, but for now I must write. I hope you have a good following on Dust.

I say publish. It's like being a scientist: publish or perish!

I'd always vote for publish as well. Because: One cannot read what is not published! *goes to check up on his own story that was started over a year ago, only consists of bits and pieces and still has not been published* Damn it!

I know, just got to get it right

So many ways this can go, corrupt rangers, cops, found by hunters or poachers, daddy turns psycho, brother joins....

It's like you've read my mind gscmar64 :)

Wonder what that flashing g light was though

Unfortunately Nemo - it's another one you wouldn't like :(

Oh, well, happy writing then...

I promise that my next story won't have any non con which may appease more of the masses :)