1. 
   gscmar64

   And a damn lot of fun to read!

   Feb 5, 2018

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2. 
   DoAdventures

   Thank you very much

   Feb 5, 2018
3. 
   Nemo of Utopia

   I personally find myself with a severe disconnect between the first chapter and the second...

   Feb 7, 2018

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4. 
   DoAdventures

   I'll admit Nemo I wanted to get into the action very quickly - opposed to my others
   
   But also the first chapter was just a quick way to introduce the setting

   Feb 7, 2018