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  1. edwards21

    Diesel City

    Sorry my next few chapters are so late. Up to my dick in work. I should hopefully have something new for this weekend.
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    Diesel City

    Okay, two things. First, Fyre, you're actually one of my big inspirations on this site, so I want to thank you for the kind words. It means a lot. Second... I don't want to give you the wrong idea about my story. I have no intention of exploring the Front Line or anything like that. So if...
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    Diesel City

    Hey, just checking in as the newest contributor. Happy to be part of the team.
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Well, that's that. Other than proofreads, I've finished writing the final chapter of Alex's route. Should be posting it Tuesday or Wednesday. I want to take a moment to look at some of the things I would improve on if I wrote this again, or ever tried to put together a version for ebook or...
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    Extreme violence rule

    I'm planning a story with a biker gang. Something like that is bound to have a ton of violence, probably some fairly brutal murders. Probably a torture/interrogation element. It's not really something I want to avoid, but at the same time, I don't want to violate the site's rules. I'm happy to...
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Hey guys. Merry Christmas I guess. Okay. So it's been months. Literally months. First I wanted to have this branch wrapped by the 1-year anniversary in October. When that went past, I decided to set a new goal for finishing by New Years, and that's looking... well, I wouldn't hold my breath...
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    Music to Write Porn By

    Always happy to make a new Delain fan! They're doing their first US headline tour next year, with support from Hammerfall. I saw them opening for Sonata Arctica, for Kamelot, and for Nightwish over the years, they are... SUPERB live. One of the best live acts I've ever seen. Can't WAIT to see a...
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    Music to Write Porn By

    I listen to either video game music or a band called Delain. They're a Symphonic Metal band out of... Holland I think, I may have to look it up, and their lead singer Charlotte has the perfect porn-writing combination of being incredibly sexy and having an incredible voice.
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    Favourite Authors

    Aaron Allston (RIP) Richard Belzer* Dennis Lehane George R. R. Martin Eric Plume John Sandford David Simon Walter Jon Williams * = If you haven't read "I am Not a Cop" and you enjoy funny books, READ THIS IMMEDIATELY.
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    What lead you to Chyoa?

    I got lead here from the /r/freeuse subreddit, and got inspired. I wish I could say more than that, but I honestly started writing REALLY quickly after discovering this site, and that's been my focus here ever since.
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay! So yet another month-long writer's block cleared up. This represents the last of the vignettes. Two chapters to go and this route will be complete! I admit, there's no plot purpose for Alex's newest gangbang. I just decided that I wanted to put her in a gangbang. I may try to be a writer...
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Please don't delete anything. There's nothing wrong with what's there dude. Even if it is an "alternate continuity" or whatever, it's not like there aren't plenty of those. My route also differs heavily from other Alex routes in terms of content, and especially of other characters.
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    *Usual list of excuses*
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Yay! I finally got to write a scene for Rachel! And it's in-bounds without messing with Stone's stuff! I've been waiting for an excuse to do that for a while now. I knew the emotional focus was going to be between Alex and Pat, with Hope and Cassie as a secondary focus, but that left Rachel out...
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    Sneak Peek at Chyoa 2

    Any chance we can get a forum link on the topbar? Might make navigating between a story and a discussion thread a bit easier.
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Just published the third of five or six vignette pieces, before the last two "real" epilogue chapters. So fun fact, the DP scene was one of the big reasons this epilogue exists. DPs are one of my favorite sexual fetishes, and because of the "anal as rite of passage" thing I was doing in the...
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I debated whether or not to write this. Apparently Vignettes pt. 2 earned me my very first Dislike. I guess for as long as I've been going on this story, that's not surprising, but I think the thing that bugs me the most is that it was anonymous. I don't have anyone to ask where I went wrong, or...
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay, this is getting to be too much. I'm going to break it up, post one or two vignettes as individual chapters every couple of days starting today. This thing's going to be a bear to read in its current form.
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Six... thousand... words. That's how long this next chapter is, and I'm not even done. Probably another thousand before I send this one off. My vignettes idea is actually working perfectly... I'm just a fuckin' verbose writer. I'd love to split it up, but there's just nowhere to do it. It all...
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    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    So some notes on the newest chapter. My original plan for it was just the conversation between Alex and Cassie, though I realized very quickly that there just wasn't enough content for the chapter. So I started thinking about the practical consequences of Alex's romp that night. I thought to...
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