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  1. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I think I'd avoid Ophir, for the reasons you said. If it were me - and it's not, let's be clear here - I'd actually go for a real country. Madagascar, impressively, has been REALLY growing in scale lately, they're one of the fastest growing industrial nations in the world (which no one talks...
  2. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    No, I think I'll be fine, I just needed to kvetch a bit. I'm about 2,500 words in. I'll get there.
  3. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I'm trying to pound out this next chapter, but man, it's going way slower than I'd like. I hope I'm not hitting burnout or something.
  4. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Well, it's posted. Hope I didn't rush through the proofreading. It feels too short to me, but that's just my own bullshit, I'm sure it's fine. It wouldn't have been unnecessary, I'm basically just splitting the one chapter I had planned into two smaller ones. Nothing really changes, other than...
  5. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    So I have a bit of a dilemma I'd like to run by you guys. I'm writing my newest chapter, and I'm about... 2,000 words in or so. Now here's the thing, my usual chapters are about twice that, so it's really short compared to everything but my earliest entries. Half the size. But I'm actually at a...
  6. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Every story's gotta have an ending. I'd rather tell a complete story and give it a nice solid stopping point than leave things hanging for ever and ever like so many things on this site. Maybe it's a weakness of mine, since I'm very much a traditional writer that way, but for me, I like knowing...
  7. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Eventually, yeah, probably. I do love me some cops n' robbers. And I admit to being a bit tired of revisiting my high school / college years. But I'm nearing the end of (my take of) Alex's storyline, maybe 5 or 6 chapters, I'll be able to check some new stuff out then. I also still want to do...
  8. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I dig it! And just... everyone, I just want to say that I'm fucking stoked at just how big this story's gotten recently. All these new writers, new paths, I'm just really happy to be a part of it all. Thanks for being awesome, everyone!
  9. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Yup, I think I'm going to file this one under "eww" as well. I don't think there's anything wrong with at least getting an intro out there. And characters have a habit of appearing as needed in these kinds of stories. Goodness knows I built a bunch of characters throughout my chapters. Though...
  10. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I'd be totally down with that. I've been talking to Shen a bit, he knows I'm a crime story buff.
  11. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    That's what the discussion's for, ain't it? What's up?
  12. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    ... More I think about it, the less happy I am with my most recent chapter. It was really just meant as a setup for an epilogue I've since cut from my outline. It doesn't really SAY anything new. I'm not going to cut it or anything, but man this didn't work for me. Well, now I know better...
  13. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    First, right on. Second, thanks for averting the ass-biting Mu warned about. I think we've now covered our bases pretty handily!
  14. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I've been talking with Stone about religions. For the sake of full disclosure, I'm actually devoutly Jewish myself, and sex isn't as taboo for us as it is for the other Abrahamic religions. Basically we we seem to be on the same page as to how Sexworld religions work, and I've been slyly adding...
  15. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Um... ew. I'm just gonna leave that to you guys I think...
  16. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay, cool. Thanks.
  17. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Hey guys, just a quick little statement. Please, please, please add tags to the chapters you add. Elmer's branch has added some tags which I don't really think represent our story as a whole, and I can't seem to edit my chapters to include tags. I don't want people searching for stuff with...
  18. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    No no no! Mu, come on! It's not like we can't do alternate continuities. That's... kind of the whole point of the site. If you have a different interpretation, please just go for it!
  19. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Yeah, I think that's a pretty big difference between our writing styles. You like the harem thing, I'm more of a poly guy. I just like the idea of a general "everyone fucks everyone else" approach. Do I sense a Troper? I feel like I sense a Troper. Anyway, I definitely get that. Most of my...
  20. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    As you may have noticed, I actually ignore that conceit in my route. Especially since it doesn't seem to come up until partway through a couple of the other routes. No real reason here other than I like hetero sex, and gangbangs would be hard to coordinate if there were less men in the world...
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