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  1. Ben Rosewood

    Questions about Conditions and a Top Ten List suggestion.

    I think the problem with a like to view ratio is that older stories would be at a huge disadvantage as it is to my understanding that there was a time where CHYOA or CHYOO didn't have likes. (would appreciate if anyone can expand on this.) I'd also like to see a separate top ten that had more...
  2. Ben Rosewood

    Aliens try to have the human race repopulate

    It could be interesting if you expand on the idea. For example: -Why do aliens want humans to repopulate? Are they intergalactic trade partners in the future? Are they experimenting further on humans? -Do the aliens have to also protect humans from some other hazard (other aliens, a disease)...
  3. Ben Rosewood

    Would appreciate feedback on my story "Gandersnatch"

    I'd recommend against using images for the most part. It restricts the types of characters you can create, and in your case, you are going to struggle to find enough images from the era. If I was you I'd delete the images and describe the characters. I'm not the best at character description...
  4. Ben Rosewood

    Would appreciate feedback on my story "Gandersnatch"

    I think it's a decent start so far. The choice to go with ENF as the main fetish for this project was a great idea in my opinion I wasn't really turned on by the sex scenes but in a way that worked for the narrative. It showed how the main character didn't really want to go through with the...
  5. Ben Rosewood

    Club Music

    IMO if it was me I would make Paul and Peter fairly different rather than identical twins (cliche example make one sporty whilst the other is nerdy) As for places to take the story: -How do they afford the ranch? Do they have to save up for it? Maybe the girls have to do some porn shoots or...
  6. Ben Rosewood

    Confessions

    - Despite the fact that 90% of the comments I get are positive, I still have to take a moment to psyche myself up and check any new comments
  7. Ben Rosewood

    Tips For Writing Sex Scenes

    This should be put into the CHYOA Guide.
  8. Ben Rosewood

    How deep do you write before posting?

    Somewhat depends. Normally I just write a chapter and publish it. I don't really plan stories out that much, as I enjoy going with the flow. However, if the story is still really high up on the Recently Updated, I'll leave it to rest for a little while. That is unless I don't have publishing...
  9. Ben Rosewood

    What keywords do you search for?

    To be honest, the only times I've searched for tags is when I'm looking for a sex act I haven't written about for a little p̶l̶a̶g̶i̶a̶r̶i̶s̶m̶ ̶ inspiration.
  10. Ben Rosewood

    Confessions

    - I've started keeping a monthly record of the number of likes I've received and chapters I've written. Thinking of making it weekly. -I find writing erotica and thinking where my stories are going to go turns me on more than reading erotica by others. -In turn I find it rather easy to get...
  11. Ben Rosewood

    Aphrodite BnB

    If it's not your thing then don't worry about. Appreciate the offer though.
  12. Ben Rosewood

    spammers

    Another Spammer spammin' it up: https://chyoa.com/user/fonagup
  13. Ben Rosewood

    Survivor fanfic story idea

    Whilst I think this idea has potential, it also seems like a lot to bite off. I'd recommend drafting a fair amount of the story before publishing it just to see what flows best. Sex itself could also add a lot of dynamics to the game. Offering sex to form alliances or the Immunity Idol. You...
  14. Ben Rosewood

    Aphrodite BnB

    My latest story: https://chyoa.com/story/Aphrodite-BnB.19557
  15. Ben Rosewood

    Public story technical help

    Yes every story is put 'in review' before being published. Should take less than 24 hours to publish.
  16. Ben Rosewood

    Biggest turn ons?

    1) Power Plays: Whilst I'm not into whips and chains, I do rather enjoy mental domination. People using their position to control people is something I find really engaging (for example Boss/Secretary relationships). I also love it when power exchanges in a relationship depending on how the...
  17. Ben Rosewood

    Write a chapter and earn money (Patreon Chapter Of Your Choice)

    I'd be interested in this offer
  18. Ben Rosewood

    spammers

    Another one: https://chyoa.com/user/GraceAllen17
  19. Ben Rosewood

    Starlight Shimmer

    To be fair, whilst I do find it jarring, it is also the only time I've ever seen it in a CHYOA story and it is interesting, even if I'm not 100% in love with it. I can see what you're getting at with the quick reading, but I still stand by my point. Still, I'm excited for what comes next.
  20. Ben Rosewood

    Starlight Shimmer

    It's off to a good start so far. I like the political storyline as it's a great way to push our protagonist into the deep end. That being said, I find the 4th wall thing a bit jarring, but at the same time, it does add flavor and style. EDIT: I also feel the 4th wall thing might work better if...
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