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Wasn’t there a story on the old CHYOO site with the same title and premise? I ask because I really liked that one, and I was wondering if you were in fact the original author.

I enjoy two things more than any other type of writing: (1) Humor. I love it when I think of something funny (at least in my own opinion) which comes naturally from the situation as opposed to a manufactured joke. An example of this is in my story It’s Good to Be the King, when the...

I use a vibrating Fleshlight and a gif of Natalie Portman’s lesbian kiss in Black Swan.

It seems to me that sexy & slutty is relative. After all, these are stories about sex, and for the most part the characters in them are going to be less inhibited and more promiscuous than people in real life. That having been said, what I like to see most in female characters is depth. I’m...

Do it! It’s not like you’d be replacing the other author’s work; you’re supplementing it, taking it in a new direction. I really like to see what happens when someone goes off on a tangent that I’d never considered.

I branch a lot at the start; the first chapter might have as many as six options, the next chapters three or four. But after that, I tend to write a linear story to the end. I do include options where it COULD branch off again, but it’s just hard to cover so many possibilities. Sometimes it’s...

If I may toot my own horn a little (no, not like that), I’m pleased with the way my “Cast of Characters” page turned out in this story. It doesn’t look great on a mobile device, but it works on a PC. I’ll share how I coded it if it’s not apparent.

So, is “Rusty Trombone” literal? Because I can’t imagine what it might be a euphemism for.

Yeah, but I still totally wanted to do her. It’s strange that this is the first time I’ve ever heard so someone actually adapting a real CHYOA story to this site (I certainly never thought of it!). Great idea, though... I bet Dr. Vivaldi is a tigress in the sack.

I think it’s a little too broad; it’s effectively summarized as “All women are suddenly hot, horny lesbians.” There’s not really any story potential there.

I would imagine that most celebrities would be aware of the Streisand Effect, summarized as: "a phenomenon whereby an attempt to hide, remove, or censor a piece of information has the unintended consequence of publicizing the information more widely, usually facilitated by the internet." In a...

I think this is a great idea... lots of possibilities for erotic adventures, of course. I suggest that it would be a good idea to think up some plot threads which do not necessarily focus on sex; in this environment, the sex is going to be easy to work in wherever you want, and to make the...

Speaking as a male who may or may not be typical when it comes to sex, here are a few things I'd say to keep in mind: (1) Obviously, there is as much diversity among men as women, and so this is all very generalized and may not be accurate for everyone. (2) You're pretty much spot-on with the...

I was going to wait a day or so before posting my already-written additions to Arethousa's thread... but then decided, what the hell.

After a somewhat lengthy hiatus to combat writer's block, I am updating this story once again! Continuing on Queen Alayna's thread at this time, but there will be updates in other areas as well.

She might say a name, for instance... or anything else which she might say to a lover during sex, play-acting out her part with an imaginary partner. One can allow for a degree of artistic license, I think; it's kind of like how a TV character might talk on the phone with someone and repeat...

I would make a different suggestion than those made so far. For many women, sex is much more emotional and mental than physical. So, rather than describing the act of masturbation in detail, describe what’s going on in her head, and the fantasy she uses to excite herself. If the story is...

If you do want to start your own story, here's some things to keep in mind: (1) The Introduction should set up the story and lead to a very general sort of choice which can take the story in several different but equally-valid directions. There is no point in having the first choice be one in...

Switching between 1st/2nd/3rd person would be a very difficult thing to pull off. However, if you need to show multiple POVs in the same story, I think it can be done in a third-person format. The choice would not be phrased as, "What do you do next?" but rather, "What happens next?" The...