I’m up to about twice as many chapters as when I first posted this. I’ve added a character summary section and have a larger cast in general. I...
It was waay easier for me to write in past tense. Present tense is hard.
If you want multiple encounters per floor you should group by theme. Orc + goblin. Pixie + faerie Queen. Holstaurs + centaur + satyr. Lamia +...
Right now it looks like you have 11 encounters(floors) that are unoccupied. Maybe better to reduce the number of floors rather than try and cram...
I’m always willing to take more feedback. I just published the third chapter so let me know what you think.
So I added two chapters. If it is something you want me to continue I’ll keep on it.
https://chyoa.com/story/Advanced-Fantasy.39456 I’ve hit a bit of a wall. Generally speaking I’ve been able to work my way around it when I get...
Post the story here and I’ll give you advice on flow. It might not be professional level, but it’s better than nothing.
Hey I have a story out right now that kinda fills that niche. The main branch is office based not high school but I would be happy to have you...
Okay, so I went through the first thirty chapters or so, adding page breaks and making some adjustments to pacing. After about chapter thirty I...
Hey I appreciate the response. I’ve definitely been working on refining my writing process and I think it improves pretty strongly over time. Do...
I added a link to the story. Let me know what you think, I’m excited to hear some of your feedback. I’m still a pretty green writer, so I...
Hi, everyone. Hoping to turn this topic into a discussion thread for my story, called “Advanced Fantasy” The biggest story line in Advanced...
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