I would imagine many of the same things you do for battle scenes would work for sex scenes. Explore the details that are important and let the...
I wouldn't. I recomend changing PoVs as little as possible and make it clear you are changing with transitions or chapter titles
I think it can work if you are changing perspective and telling a different type of story. But keep in mind readers are there for a 2nd person...
Stay away from forcing exposition, but if you can work have a character introduce themselves naturally, you should. For example the latex zoo...
I think targetthyself means he doesn't like reading game stories and doesn't know how to write with variables. However, before I read the Chyoa...
For what it's worth, variables are also used in stories. They allow you to track decisious without creating a whole new branch. And I personally...
Is there a list of features that will be in the new Formula Parser somewhere?
There are a few fetishes revolving around treating the perverted, dirty, and raunchy as completely normal.
Again, it doesn't have to be a full sex scene. Foreplay would be fine. In your story the Curse of the Black Ooze you have breast sucking and...
We have different definitions of Open World. You can (and should) write a rich world full of opportunities for authors to add their own spin....
You said what I was trying to say with the Skyrim comment except way better I think we will have to agree to disagree on this. Your correct...
For what its worth, I think completely user generated would be easier and have less drama.
I like the idea but don't know if I read enough to vote fairly. There will also be some people upset when they don't get picked. Two questions;...
I hope you will let me be a hard ass for a moment. Do not even try to be open world. Skyrim had several proffesionals working fulltime for years...
Completed may not be the best term. I know its not the norm, but there are good stories where the owner has more or less finished the story...
You're in the right sub-forum, but I think these suggestions would do better with their own threads. That way people can like the ones they want...
1. 95% of everything is crap. That includes 95% of the stories on this site. 2. Sometimes readers want to do more than just hit the like button on...
Sorry to get off topic, but what are spoiler tags?
I did try messaging them a few months back. The author isn't on too often, so they may have forgotten to reply. I tried again, and I'll see how it...
I submitted some chapters for approval a few months back. The story's owner has been online a lot since then but hasn't approved the chapters. Is...
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