Interesting concept, and you've delivered well on it. The characters definitely have verisimilitude. Good proof reading. Interesting dialogue....
Reminds me of the old movie "Demon Seed" from 1977... :) Course in that movie the AI wanted to screw the lady of the house... in some rather...
Not that I know of, sorry. Thought this was a published piece here.
Well, it'd really help if I had a link. :) I'll happily give it a read and send you some feedback.
Congrats! Feels AWESOME, doesn't it? I try to remember to follow whoever does that for me. Lets em know I'm willing to hear anything they want...
Don't worry about it too much. I just keep up a daily release schedule, and folks find the story. Sometimes they make requests and I...
That was the old "Bioware" model, IMHO. You can see it in almost all of their games starting with "Baldur's Gate 2" (BG1 didn't really follow...
Ouch. Just had a collar bone finish knitting, so sympathy. (6 more weeks till I can do anything, so here's hoping your recovery is swift and it...
Well, I'm about at that guesstimate for ASH as well. (Unless I add more endings... but that would just be masochistic unless one of the new...
Good luck to you! I really admire those authors that can wrap their heads around the concept and do it well. Some can't. (Douglas Adams falls...
Exactly why I like this site so much. If I REALLY don't like the direction a story is going I often have the option to write my way out of it, or...
That's fair. I admit that my personal favorite CHYOA books didn't have multiple endings but rather one ending which all of paths led to....
Honestly, I don't much care for the Conditional Variables. I grew up with Choose Your Own Adventure books, so my writing style lends itself more...
IANAL, but from what I understand one of the major criteria for defamation is actual harm. I remember back in the day Penthouse publishing...
I admit to being a cannabis user. Light, mostly before writing because I come up with some neat crosswires. (The Supernatural plot for Special...
Just wanted to toss this one out there. I've found that most authors have little things they do that helps them write. Thought I'd share a few...
Or rereading it, and noticing that ONE little typo that you missed... That hurried panic to fix it with the "Edit Silently" button before anybody...
Hope you feel better soon! Sorry to hear about your illness, but good to hear from you.
Sounds good. I like using other words. One of my characters, I consistently use the word "conical" which isn't precise but gives a general idea...
3,300 likes and 400 subscribers? Damn! I'm gonna have to keep up the pace. Don't applaud just throw comments. ;)
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