Hey, I have a few stories on the site and, in many of them, I try to pepper in choices that lead to "Bad Ends" like one would see in classic...
Well, this is my second story here on CHYOO so, again, I thought it would be good to put a thread up here to gather people's opinions on things....
I'm a new writer and this is my first story so I thought that it'd be good to put a topic here to get some feedback. I'm open to advice,...
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