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How about highlights be called Patron's Pick and instead of highlighting just their story, each month they can pick out a story they want to highlight, so it's not necessarily self serving.

Maybe create a new Patreon Writer forum to post story requests and then writers can post that they're taking one of the requests and then post when they've added the story.

I volunteer my services in support of the cause!

I don't mind the highlighted stories showing up like sponsored ads do in google searches, just one or two stories from sponsors and the rest are either or. You're told upfront it's being highlighted because it was a sponsor who wrote it, so there's no deception going on. Not sure how the...

Can you change your name to Friedman is Great?

I use google translate too for foreign names. It just reads weird when it's a made up name in a language you're familiar with.

I've had my stories featured in the sotw, it was when I was updating them a lot. So frequent updates and new threads will help if you want to be featured.

The rose whip: Eating out a girl that is sitting on your shoulders as she performs sit ups. Next: "Shooting the moon."

Yeah, that read much better. Third person is easy to follow too, because you don't have the story telling you what you're thinking, it's the main character's thoughts.

This looks neat and incredibly complicated. Good luck with it! One thing I noticed; you mention that the name can be customized, but the normal custom text bars aren't available on the sidebar. Not sure if that has to do with the gaming system getting in the way or what.

If this is going to go with the John Hughes theme, maybe you could add some antagonists, like rivals at a costume contest that need to be put in their place.

What's the story about? I still need to finish up the Chris line in your party story.

Seems to read fine as 2nd person. What you should try to do is keep in either past tense for present tense though. You switch back and forth throughout and it's better practice to just keep with one. So if you want the story to have that old school 'choose your own adventure feel', keep...

Welcome back! Look forward to seeing the new and improved stories.

Congrats on the new novel. I looked through your library and wow are you prolofic on there! Guess that's no surprise though considering your work on chyoa. The title is a tempting read, if I can scrounge up the money. Might have to ask for an amazon gift card for Christmas.

It's cool. I'm interested to see where you go with the Ishtar story so don't want to overload you. Again, I' m not familiar with FF7, so bear with me if I don't get the lore right.

Added to the FF7 themed line, Nemo. I never finished the game, so I don't think it'll stay true to the source.

I went with the logical conclusion. We could branch off to try a different end or work on a new line.

I need to figure out a standardized inner monologue format. It's just so open to interpretation on how to present it. Also, rape is bad. I get why it is often romanticized as a taking of, or loss of control fantasy for men and women, but it still makes me uncomfortable to write about. As...

Just write one out and go from there. It's easier to jump onto something tangible than to discuss possibilities. I'll be happy to collaborate on threads.