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Hey that’s still really awesome. I’m just glad that you got that far. I still think some of the most fun chapters for me are the Mata chapters. I’m really guilty of favoritism.

I don’t suppose you’ve read any more? About how far did you end up getting?

Thanks for the suggestion. I submitted it for review. Am I going to regret this?

I’m sure I’m going to regret this, but I was told that you would read my stuff. https://chyoa.com/story/Advanced-Fantasy.39456 The Arthur branch is the big one.

I got one. When you post to a newer or less popular story and then it gets almost no likes. Tell me about soul crushing.

I don’t know if you are still looking on here but I added another chapter recently, let me know what you think!

Okay, so I’m up to a lot of chapters now and I was curious if anyone had anymore feedback for me?

Every chapter your characters should go somewhere new, talk to someone new, or do something cool.

Don’t forget “gluk, gluk, gluk”

I made a banana stand reference in one of my stories with a satyr running it who looked awfully familiar…

If there’s a decline in quality I can’t tell. I mean I have absolutely canned full chapters that I didn’t think met my standards, I wouldn’t post if I didn’t think it was worth it. One thing that I did notice is that I’ve stopped putting tags on my chapters and I wonder how much of that’s a factor.

I commit time theft at work.

It just has to sound good to the reader. If it sounds like it would plausibly feel good to the characters it really doesn’t matter how awkward or uncomfortable it might be in practice.

I read all my dialogue out loud. I think that it helps it feel more natural and organic.

Nail on the head, it’s so frustrating to be a part of a conversation with lots of people in the comments section and wanting to reply to one specific thing.

The forum has a reply button in the comment section why doesn’t the main site?

here’s something that I think is pretty relevant, pretty verifiable proof that when you stop posting to a story frequently it pretty drastically drops the number of likes for subsequent chapters. Maybe I’ll get back to the like ratio that I had earlier but that’s probably where it is now.

My favorite part of the film is when the cameras pans up to reveal Morbius hanging from the ceiling like a bat over the goons then he says “It’s Morbin’ time!”

I definitely see that early chapters in a story will almost always have more likes than later chapters, making it look like your quality of writing is going down over time. I don’t think that is the case though and probably the result of older chapters just having more time to gather likes. Plus...

I wanted to write a story where a married guy goes to Japan for vacation and ends up trapped in a government run, free use, breeder program set up to combat chronic low birth rates. It specifically targeted tourists to encourage genetic diversity. Maybe he gets released on the condition that...