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That's actually not bad.

I don't understand what that means.

Well, there goes Operation Shark Maid Cafe.

Another thing that turns me off is if the author is being too vague. I can't masturbate to something if I don't know what it is.

So, Dickman stole a time machine?

Time Travel and Time Theft are two completely different things as far as I can tell. I'm just concerned about it interfering with my mission. If Dickman is also a time traveler, that could complicate things.

You steal time? That is scary. What happens to that time? What do you use it for?

How do you grapple with a sword in one hand? I've never tried that before. Do they use swords in kung fu? I've never encounter any filipino martial artists. Are they different from regular martial artists. I can understand an inexperienced fighter making those mistakes. Not sure why they'd...

That must be awkward if there's people living with you.

That's only if you are out of position for a weapon strike. If you are in position, you should just use your weapon strike unless you're trying to avoid killing your opponent. The problem with planning for their response is it that often requires thinking time. A real fight can be very chaotic...

I will excuse this turn off depending on circumstances like if you are out of position for a weapon strike, like as a blade lock like what you described, but a competent combatant should never be out of position for a weapon strike. If your opponent has half a brain, they will see a crotch...

I also find scarecrows to do me turn off.

Oh thank god, it's a real struggle thinking of words other than "said". Here's my take. Don't promise readers what they want only to pull a bait and switch. If you advertise your story as being about a girl being humiliated, don't turn it into a femdom story once you're got your readers hooked...

Oh, another thing that turns me off is when during a sword fight, a character hits their opponent with their hand or foot instead of using their sword.

The planet Klyntar?

Thanks, this is some good advice. Fortunately, I have yet to use any linking chapters. My story is an adaption of the Persona games so they won't be interacting unless I adapt the labyrinth games. I've already done fifty chapters using {first_name} for the P5 protagonist and can't be bother to...

I'm not sure how breeding would work on this site. I mean you'd have to have an 18 year time skip every time you do it. Doesn't seem like a practical fetish. Vore is that one about eating people? No idea what NC or rimming are. I guess I best off do my own thing and not think too hard what...

Well, my first story is based on Persona and the Kamoshida arc alone is over 50 pages so I can imagine that even if I only do that, I'd still have almost 1000 chapters. I'm not comfortable making a story public, though they are moderated. Is there anything that most people find off-putting...

So a climax in narrative could make people like stories more? Any idea what the top ten did right?

Are they at sea or on land? And she's still out numbered. Sometimes, it's better to flee than to fight.