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  1. Loeman

    Chapter finish Hi-Five!

    Chapter finish Hi-Five!
  2. Loeman

    Two ideas

    The best Free Use can do is consequences, I think. Consequences for the user, or the used. Like - Superman basically has free use, because no one could stop him (pretend no aliens or magic wielders or Kryptonite). So, its his own morality that might stop him, and the consequences would still...
  3. Loeman

    Two ideas

    True Free Use is a literary sexy dead end. Its like starting an RPG on New Game +, without an extra dungeon or double final boss or scaling enemies. It only has impact when you already care about the characters, and you establish they care about themselves. Even then, the high is still fleeting.
  4. Loeman

    Yikes. And I was going to avoid speaking - for luck.

    Yikes. And I was going to avoid speaking - for luck.
  5. Loeman

    That's the laze devil speaking. You should blaze it and write until your fingers explode.

    That's the laze devil speaking. You should blaze it and write until your fingers explode.
  6. Loeman

    Post Paused Pending Pedo Proofing

    Oh, well if they age and shes immature its pretty clear cut.
  7. Loeman

    Post Paused Pending Pedo Proofing

    I went back and forth on this in my head a couple times. This is obviously a gray area, and there *could* be room for pervy finessing that *might* make it technically-acceptable-ish. Where I see it becoming pretty clearly on the wrong side of gray area is this - Consider that these 'Gods'...
  8. Loeman

    A RL sports team fanfic.

    An advantage of the set-variable approach would also be that the story might stay relevant longer, since team rosters switch up yearly.
  9. Loeman

    A RL sports team fanfic.

    Here's a story idea that occurred to me that I would never write, and don't have time to - What about making a story about being the plaything (or stud) of a major sports team (male or female depending on preference)? Like, names of the athletes, pre-game (reverse) gangbangs, etc. Support the...
  10. Loeman

    Or - Doadventures could try the Tonya Harding method of getting on the podium.

    Or - Doadventures could try the Tonya Harding method of getting on the podium.
  11. Loeman

    'Cause if you don't change it, those pointy, pokey odd numbers will burrow into your psyche -...

    'Cause if you don't change it, those pointy, pokey odd numbers will burrow into your psyche - inducing bad vibes, bad luck and, eventually, madness.
  12. Loeman

    Reasonable violence and rules about homepages?

    Well, existing stories also may have simply passed under the radar.
  13. Loeman

    What stories would you want to see make a comeback?

    https://chyoa.com/story/Celebrity-Sex-Arcade.10082 Celebrity Sex Arcade had a good enough start to it.
  14. Loeman

    Gotta be distressing. We wish you good whatchamacallit with your new whatsit.

    Gotta be distressing. We wish you good whatchamacallit with your new whatsit.
  15. Loeman

    Auracide - an issue I've run into more than once. ... How shitty.

    Auracide - an issue I've run into more than once. ... How shitty.
  16. Loeman

    Multiple "Catagories" per story:

    I only worry about adding so many categories in that, in the interest of exposure, one is almost obligated to assign as many categories as possible to a story. I get that, for example, in a MILF/TEEN/SCI-FI/ROMANCE/BDSM story all that *can* be central to the story (rather than peripheral), but...
  17. Loeman

    The Agency

    THE GOOD - Your introductory page has some mistakes, but is a reasonable setup and good effort. The idea of a young, innocent girl (woman) being taken advantage of by a camera has obvious appeal. Its not new, but can be delightfully executed, and your story has enough at the intro and by user...
  18. Loeman

    Ass or Arse

    Come v cum is a better fight imo. There's no fight in ass v arse. It's been won.
  19. Loeman

    Ass or Arse

    Ass is the future. And, to a lesser extent, the present. It's the stronger word, Brit or no. Arse - only if youre trying to get an archaic feel, which is the purpose of the topic. ... And then, probably, Ass, still. The 'arse' vibe, for better or worse, is simply tryhard-off. Language...
  20. Loeman

    That may be neither here nor there. Pick carefully, and change carefully. But you may be...

    That may be neither here nor there. Pick carefully, and change carefully. But you may be oversensitive to some perceived egotism.
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