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Uhm... wow. Ok. 10K likes on A Special Hell. Thank you to EVERYONE. Seriously. Feels absolutely amazing.

Thanks to everybody for chiming in! Another one that drives me kinda nuts is when there's clearly one word that turns on the author for some reason. You don't see it as much any more, thank goodness, but back in the old days of erotica, there were authors that would use the word "Action"...

"Hello ladies... you know, funny thing, I almost wore that today? That would have been an awkward conversation, huh? Yes, that terrible joke is just the start of your torture. For the next several hours you will be subjected to poetry, bad fanfic, terribly unflattering cosplays which I will...

There are certain lines that just make me CRINGE and totally put me out of the mood. The classic exchange that you may all know is... "We can't do that, you're my BLANK!" "Step-BLANK!" "Oh, All right then." Yeah, instant... ugh... fantasy ruined. Because you're half assing it at that...

Look, if we're going to do this Carmen Diaz Cosplay, I want it AUTHENTIC. I don't care if she used some fake stuff, I want it to look like it should have!

So far, a lot of fun! Course, when you mention the governess' daughter, the first thought that comes to mind is, "How many times must I ask you to call me Anna?" "At least Once More, Miss..." What can I say, I like the classics. ;P So far pretty decent and a nice flow. You've had a lot of...

Ok, sweet daughter, but I told you I regularly come five times a day! Why did you only bring four condoms?

Well, one thing I've noticed from linear adventures that use variables... (And this strictly is from old school books like Lone Wolf, so YMMV) is that it really helps to map out your story map on paper before you even start writing. At this point flowcharts are pretty needed, just so you can...

Well... this sucks. Just checked the news, and apparently the way I describe Brent is the new face of terrorism in the United States. Not kidding, apparently my fondness for Hawaiian shirts means that I'm a terrorist now. Somebody has gotta break the news to Weird Al... This has GOT to feel...

I honestly will have to defer to everybody else on here. Don't see it. Like... at all. I think her character in Harry Potter is a self-righteous, florid, fatuous Fathead, and her online persona ain't much different.

Although I must say, that's almost meme worthy. Right up there with "All Your Base" as far as need for editing, yet somehow shows the need for old west and Dinosaurs at the same time. Dammit, Now I want an old west dinosaur chyoa!

60. The magic 99 Bottles of Beer on the wall... After each one is drunk, the person must sing a complete version of the song. All 99 verses. If it is done so, and manages to get at least one other person to join in, each person involved in the song gets to agree on a wish. The problem is...

Another quick one, if I may... Let us KNOW when you are not an English native speaker/writer. English speakers are much more forgiving at that point, because we KNOW how fucked up our language is. Recently really enjoyed a story more because of the fact it felt like a dub from another...

How did my story world become more realistic than the real one?

No Miss Merlaine I don't think that the new uniform is sexist at all. After all, the yoga pants and shirt only turn transparent when you lie. Now, I'll ask you one more time about that missing money, and just so you're aware, I believe the next step involves the regulation panties.

"Nu-uh big bro, I'm not gonna give you your room keys back! Guess you're just gonna have to reach behind my back and TAKE them." It had been strange. Ever since our family's arrival at the Sea Psy clinic my bratty little sister's behavior had gotten more and more brazen. The women in the...

Ok, first off, it helps to add a link to the story you'd like feedback on. Here it is for anybody else who'd like to read. Thanks for reaching out to folks, and I'll try to be honest and give feedback in the hope that you understand that first and foremost, I want you to KEEP WRITING...

First off... Almost everybody hates "John Doe" as the default, nearly anything's better than that, because reading that just puts me right out of the story. Just a personal opinion of course. The characters seem well thought out though, and your John Doe Does have a personality, which is...

Not my Favorite, but definitely my most effective chapter title has been "Jump to a Sex Scene! (Major Spoilers!)" to judge at least by how fast it's shot up in my view count. Nobody likes it... but everybody is reading it apparently. However, I admit I have a tendency to click on titles with...

So... finally got around to putting some custom art on ASH. Forgot I had a perfect piece sitting around.