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Well we know better now don't we? XD thanks for the feedback and the image is new I believe, haven't looked at using a new one. Hmmm...

Damn it I was super confident I would get some replies XD oof. Perhaps the weekend will present a different outcome ahahaha Deep breaths spectre, deep breaths. "Reality is often disappointing..."

Meine got! I'm certainly beginning to notice that if you want your story to hit big, make it an incest XD Good story premise, you did well for your first. Very well in fact, congrats Haha :)

"For if knowledge is power, then a God am I."

A shame too, as I've rewritten and published new content for a wider audience. Just comes to show that first impression means everything. Perhaps as a joke I could republish my new content as a new story to see how that goes. It's a funny idea XD even funnier if it does better than my current...

Thanks for taking the time to glance, any small bit of info is helpful to me and I appreciate your comment about my work being alright. Lately my insecurities came back which is a real bitch to deal with, and recovering from a recent surgery isn't helping XD So far I believe to be my greatest...

I love receiving comments but alas, I've only gotten one in my Monster Girls story. Feels sad man XD I just changed the genre from fantasy to miscellaneous, part of a story's success is a good first impression but also arriving at the perfect genre where the people are most active or hungry...

Oooof, I still remember making this post as if it were yesterday XD Just wanted to thank you all for the advice, the feedback, the support and some of the criticism urged me to almost rewrite my monster hunter story. There was a point made about my story being linear and not what people look...

Woof. My stubborn stories? Might as well be all the stories I have written XD My first story I viewed as something generic and simple, an easy story to start from as my first experience in writing. But I remember fondly of another author who began published their story around the same time I...

"If you don't have confidence, you are not going to do anything in life." Well I'm confident in that I've improved this story much more from before so, here it goes. https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Girls.21210 Let me know if it's to your liking, if you have any requests or questions or...

Better late then never haha. Thanks for the advice, when I first made the post I was in a mixed state. My story had plenty of attention but I began to get competitive, it's a bad habit I'm trying to shake off Haha. When it comes to hobbies, I start getting competitive quick and yea that's not a...

I understand, I’m only able to post twice a week due to working full time among other needs. Well, if you were asking for a character to cameo in your story, I can let you borrow Nihja. She is a natural red head with freckles and bright blue eyes, described to have perfect breasts and an ass...

Hey! Actually have read upon your story before, so it’s nice seeing you in the hangout. My story is sort of a generic fantasy type thing, I’ll set up a link at the end of the post. I am curious, are you asking if I would your character to make a cameo appearance in my story or if I would like to...

Sorry for the late response my guy, I’ve been busy. But thanks for the advice, you have my gratitude. A few days after the post I kind or realized it didn’t really mater if I got likes or attention, I just wanted to write what I wanted to tell. Getting some fans along the way is an extra, not a...

Many thanks! I came to learn that myself and after hearing that sort of advice from other story writers. I forgot the key rule of writing for a moment during my post, why am I writing the story? To my enjoyment or to appeal to others? You want it to be a bit of both, but I believe the story is...

Hey, thanks for the response. Been a while since I set up the post, I did not expect to find any other replies to it so I’m glad XD I’m grateful for the feedback, even if not all of them are positive. The critical points I like to call tough love, where even if someone says you’re not a good...

So you’re saying stay strong, keep writing and in time you will find an audience? I suppose you’re right, that’s how it happened with my first story. It began to spark intrigue in some people and when it became story of the week just an INSANE amount of viewership, likes and favorites hit me...

So after giving it a go on writing my first story on chyoa and feeling I can do better with the skills I have required, I decided to jump to a new opportunity and explore a brand new story open and ripe with opportunities! Problem is I’ve zero feedback and support towards it XD I’ve given my...

Monster Hunter is a fantasy story about a monster hunter exploring a world full of monsters, girls, and monster girls. https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Hunter.21210 I’ve posted a few new chapters to my story so far, aside from criticism on the writing style and any grammatical errors I would...

This was posted before under the name A Hunter’s Call I think Monster Hunter gives a better explanation as to what the story is about. https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Hunter.21210 I’ve added plenty of chapters by now and it’s a slow build as each chapter is pretty long, buuut hopefully some...