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OK I like this idea, in order to make it last longer though I'd be more inclined to have the ability to unfreeze and then refreeze as and when the protagonist decided. Totally on board with the non-concensual but it needs to be a better retaliation or just that the main character wouldn't even...

Could the notable writers not include - during a four week cycle, of writers stories that have attained SOW? That would at the very least change the list on monthly basis and send readers down the list to then check out the individuals other stories / contributions?

Using only [*Inside The Game*] as the main story I've read of yours and might I say enjoyed. You've done an incredible amount of work on this story, and I believe it should make SOW (If it hasn't already?) to quote Zeebop "little more showing and less telling" I couldn't emphasise this more...

Hi Nemo, I absolutely agree - my repetitive words have got on my nerves and to the point of re-writing whole chapters to remove that particular annoying itch. I will and have tried to get better at this. Thank you

Hi Zeebop. 1) I do have a tendancy to write like that and reading that feedback I will go through and fix those / resolve moving forwards as I agree nd on this guidance, it looks sloppy. (Wasn't the intention) 2) it was something I thought I'd try - my idea was to make her a bit of a slut in...

Nemo, I think this is a brilliant idea, I do wish there was more on the main site, I get a lot of favourites and a good amount of views and likes but no real feedback (Only a few authors that are genuinely interested in my Jessica’s Choices character) I have only added links to the stories in...

Absolutely loved writing these last five chapters! Writing Jessica differently has been fun and can only get better (I hope)

Post a link when you get a chance

Think that might be the point in the story? Might be non-concensual?

Here again, looking to see if anyone would like to see me continuing down a different path whilst my current time is consumed writing about Jessica and Brad

So excited to write the next chapters and publish them. Following after https://chyoa.com/chapter/Booked-and-packed.469597

I always find that my scenes last two or three chapters but that's only because I like to have options thrown in, giving opportunity to another writer that may see it going in a different direction.

New updated chapter, https://chyoa.com/chapter/Inhibitions.466631 How do people feel about Clarissa? I want Jessica to feel pressured into the situation and play on her inhibitions on being with another girl. Does anyone have any preference on how they think the chapter should progress?