I find a change is as good as a rest. Sometimes alternating between projects helps. Lets you come back to what you're stuck on with fresh eyes.
This story has too many chapters and they're too long. So I'm breaking this review into parts....
Dammit, now I'm behind.
Happy to be of assistance. I think.
State of the Story: There are 1,122 chapters. (+58) The longest branch is 35 chapters deep. (+0) There are currently 322 chapters to be written....
CHYOA and Literotica tend to facilitate very different posting styles, so I don't know the best way to advise you. Single chapter stories tend to...
I know the pace has been sluggish, and it's really been a slice-of-life, day-by-day story at this point. I won't say that things are going to get...
Oh, please add "100 Candles" to MasochistMode. Probably nobody will subject themselves to that, but maybe there will be a brave soul...
And I haven't even subjected you to the brain slug story! (yet)
You generally won't be able to access the story map or other dynamic content.
Brain slugs are surprisingly more popular than erotic horror. So far.
Updated the lore dump. Expect very much a continual slow escalation of sexy times, there won't be a sudden orgy or anything. But I've mapped out...
Hit an end, calling the review there....
Because Gambio requested it, and has been a good sport about reviewing all my stories (except the latest), doing a new Masochist Mode-style...
Need to go through and do a couple chapter tweaks. I want to standardize titles (All italics rather than all caps). If you've read this far then...
For the Love of God, Monstressor! Gloria Fortunado has been entombed alive...except for a single hole. A gloryhole. Can she survive long enough by...
State of the Story: There are 1,064 chapters. (+64) The longest branch is 35 chapters deep. (+1) There are currently 322 chapters to be written....
Have a tentative outline until chapter 34, or about 11 weeks of writing at this pace, with some vague future events planned beyond that. Slow...
Okay, so first post in this thread is now going to be the notes-and-lore-dump spot for the story. Updated sporadically.
Internet Archive has some of it: https://web.archive.org/web/20180916201925/https://chyoa.com/story/Free-Use-High-School.17883 ...but just the...
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