"Tsk." Ina clicks her tongue, she still had too little information to work with. "Try and send a message to the Moff." She orders, looking at...
"A military campaign?" Ina couldn't help but ponder, Are they invading another system, or is it a military exercise? She ponders, still wondering...
"A wise choice." Ina replies, moving back into the ship. "Take off. We are to meet up with the Glory, and make our escape from this system." She...
"Stand down." Ina raises her arm to order her guards, "I'm not leaving you, Yara. I'm giving you a choice. Stay here, and fight a futile battle....
"Damn it." Ina groans after hearing more details about the rebels numbers. "Apologies, Yara. But with our troops, I doubt we'll be able to hold...
"The Moff left... with the majority of his forces? Just as the rebels come to invade?" Ina raised an eyebrow, There is no doubt a traitor is among...
"The defense?" Ina raises an eyebrow, Perhaps... With her leadership, depending on how many men were stationed in this planet, and how quickly the...
"What?" Ina was shocked at the information she received, "Damn." She clicks her tongue, if the rebels did have enough power to take the system,...
"What in the world?" Ina gasps, but quickly regains her composure due to her own experience in combat. "Get our men to make a defensive perimeter....
"A mining permit?" Ina gives their request a quick glance, checking out the company, what they're trying to mine, and the terms they're asking for...
"Okay..." Fei takes a deep breath, holding onto her dagger tightly. She watches the boar run head first onto the tree, "Now's my chance..." She...
"Look, I want you to distract the beast. Throw a rock at it, and run up the tree." Fei whispers in an annoyed tone, "I'm already rewarding you...
(I think I got it.) Closing her bestiary as she begins her plan. She looks toward Peng, "How good are you at climbing trees?" She asks, wondering...
M-mated!? Fei's eyes go wide, blushing ever so slightly. That can't be right, can it? I mean... She shakes her head, trying to focus on the task...
Spotting their prey, Fei immediately stops moving to avoid making a sound by accidentally stepping on a twig, or some crisp leaves. A Dire-Boar......
Ina walks down from her ship, wearing a sensual dress crafted within her own planet. The fabric clung to her large breasts, and curvy body, while...
Gave a bit of an edit. For the legion, navy, and planet, I'll leave that to you!
Hmm, in that case, how about "Persuasion?"
"Ghhh." Fei couldn't help but grumble, blushing as she realized the goblin she captured may be a bigger pervert than expected... even among his...
For a more serious answer, I think Tjf's problem with the sentence is redundancy. With the "nape of her neck" part.
Separate names with a comma.