I think your stories are great by the way.
That's true and thanks Nemo unfortunately the way my mind works every time I get close to a woman that history pops back up and long story short...
I should of said this from the start but except for the demons and powers etc this really happened to me and I never got the revenge I wanted I...
that's what I thought as well. I just hope my writing skills are up to it so I don't blow it.
I usually just write any kind of action that takes place in my story until it is finished or is set up to lead into the next chapter without...
Do you have any ideas that I may have overlooked or feedback?
Working on High School Hell looking for feedback.
I have also thought up that his shadow can manipulate things around him but I don't want my character to be a all powerful shadow manipulator...
Ohh okay that makes sense sorry my bad
I was also thinking that he could solidify a shadow he would become a living ghost giving his body to give another shadow controlled by him now...
He could literally pop his head out of a wall and have a chat with someone or go down on a woman, tease her clit,feel her up and while obviously...
A friend also brought that up. I was thinking as long as a shadow covers it he can touch it. For example he could finger fuck a character while...
On my Story "High School Hell" I'm thinking on what powers the main character is going to obtain. Right now the one my imagination seems to be set...
Hopefully that didn't come out sounding like a complaint. I still like the story and looking forward to see where it goes.
I like your Doomsday type alien story the one thing that seems a bit off to me anyway "IF" this alien is supposed to basically be a breeding...
Been off of Forum a long time, back now hope everything is going great for everyone else. Me not so much but hey I'm still living so n.a.b
Thanks for your input 2p1k3 I appreciate it
Me too
I'm open for almost any woman just as long as she has a good heart and personality cause I dated a cold hearted,hot bodied bitch once when things...
I'm writing a first person cause although at times it seems like a second maybe I need to do another rewrite of High School Hell but I want the...
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