That's actually not bad.
I don't understand what that means.
Well, there goes Operation Shark Maid Cafe.
Another thing that turns me off is if the author is being too vague. I can't masturbate to something if I don't know what it is.
So, Dickman stole a time machine?
Time Travel and Time Theft are two completely different things as far as I can tell. I'm just concerned about it interfering with my mission. If...
You steal time? That is scary. What happens to that time? What do you use it for?
How do you grapple with a sword in one hand? I've never tried that before. Do they use swords in kung fu? I've never encounter any filipino...
That must be awkward if there's people living with you.
That's only if you are out of position for a weapon strike. If you are in position, you should just use your weapon strike unless you're trying to...
I will excuse this turn off depending on circumstances like if you are out of position for a weapon strike, like as a blade lock like what you...
I also find scarecrows to do me turn off.
Oh thank god, it's a real struggle thinking of words other than "said". Here's my take. Don't promise readers what they want only to pull a bait...
Oh, another thing that turns me off is when during a sword fight, a character hits their opponent with their hand or foot instead of using their...
The planet Klyntar?
Thanks, this is some good advice. Fortunately, I have yet to use any linking chapters. My story is an adaption of the Persona games so they...
I'm not sure how breeding would work on this site. I mean you'd have to have an 18 year time skip every time you do it. Doesn't seem like a...
Well, my first story is based on Persona and the Kamoshida arc alone is over 50 pages so I can imagine that even if I only do that, I'd still have...
So a climax in narrative could make people like stories more? Any idea what the top ten did right?
Are they at sea or on land? And she's still out numbered. Sometimes, it's better to flee than to fight.
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