I agree, I love female POV. I need to work adding more of her thoughts to make it work properly. I do try to make my chapters more than just...
This is a great point about dialogue. I will think how best to add more. I guess the story so far has just been Yasmin on her own and there wasn't...
Story Link I wanted some feedback on how the story is going. I kinda feel like overhauling the current chapters, adding more detail about her...
https://chyoa.com/story/A-Good-View.37586 So I am several chapters deep on two different paths. I just wanted some feedback on the style so far...
I was thinking about this exact question. I always write female POV, but for my first CHYOA story I'm writing the same story from both POVs. One...
Hi I have a story and I am not sure if it is pending, or approved. Some chapters show as published and have views. Other chapters show as "In...
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