I don't get the "A vs B" discussion here. Why not have both? More suggestions on the front page is always good. People come here, they look for...
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Well, you are certainly right there, and adjectives like "big" or "beautiful" are always highly subjective and to be used with caution, especially...
I get what you mean and agree in principle, but this still doesn't work for me. "From 32B to 34D" simply doesn't really creates any pictures in...
In general, avoid description with letter, numbers and figures that you can't know by just looking at somebody. Avoid describing a person as 1,65...
Oh, thank you. :)
@Zeebop I tip my hat. This is all amazing advice and the work, effort and investment you put in here is beyond words for me. You deserve more...
It could be very annoying in a story that is written by only one author though.
True, but classes give people a sense of order. Makes it easier to identify and orientate for some readers, especially in a fantasy setting....
This is a wonderful idea. I need to bookmark this and return when I have more time. Great thread and exceptional kind and professional advice so far.
For what it's worth, I'll add my 50 cent: I like a good non-con story, but everything "real life" is a turn-off for me, and I am not only talking...
Some great posts here.
Noboby here watched the Westworld series, where robots rise against their fate of being sex dolls?
Wow, thank you! This is... very nice to hear. :) Can you leave a comment right at the chapter where you have the problem? Would probably help me...
Don't know if it helps, but the Xiang-thread of my Happy Maid story deals with a woman who slowly develops fantasies and dreams about being...
Start small and expand. Game mode is excellent to start with the path of 3-4 girls, establish the plot and the structure, maybe have some other...
I like the thought of doing this in game mode, and initial decisions influence if you end up having sex with your best friend in the end. Would...
Start an excel sheet. Note down the variables. Look them up from time to time. Problem solved. ;)
My rule of thumb is: Give the reader at least two options. That feels like a choice. Don't give him 5 choices, if you don't have to. So start...
You are right, but I disagree slightly: There are a few ways to create meaningful choices. One is to introduce a set of character stats (not too...
Separate names with a comma.
