Dacia now you're just being silly, everyone know's the prophesied location of the heavenly starchild's birth is in Denmark. ;-)
Congratulations...that must be a real buzz.
Ha Ha...no worries. :-)
Perhaps I'm mistaken but has the same story been awarded SOTW twice in a row? I'm presuming that SOTW changes every Monday and accidental incest...
I'm not sure if that was meant to be humorous but i did chuckle...Bob...brilliant. I do agree though, a meatball with an eye from which planet...
I agree likes are not a wholly reliable gauge but in the absence of a better system it’s what we’ve got.
I suppose the obvious answer is the amount of likes. You know you’re really doing well if you get lots of chapter comments, that’s what I use as a...
All great advice from an excellent author.
I use Word with Grammarly, I agree with Ben, madness not to use Grammarly, it’s very good. I’ve not paid for the full version, I’d be interested...
I see what you mean, and it’s easily done. Separating the dialogue from the narrative... The dialogue will always depend on the content, ie are...
I’m not the right person to answer as I’m by no means an expert on the chyoa rules and my stuff doesn’t get near the line plus your subject matter...
I agree re 2nd, I can’t write it at all. One of the reasons I started writing on chyoa was to try to get out of my comfort zone. I’d only ever...
That’s quite common on here. We love the build up and afterwards but the action itself can be tough to write. Read your favourite authors on here...
To be fair I’m not bothered which POV people use, or even if it is wrongly categorised, as you say some may not fully grasp the concept. I was...
I agree, 2nd works best for choose your own format, I just don’t know why people then categorise it as 3rd!
Hi I’ve only read the first chapter but it’s a promising start, well written and good prose, I like the way you talk to the reader directly,...
I'll admit that my spelling and grammar are terrible and my vocabulary is not much better. English maybe my mother tongue but if it wasn't for...
I never knew you could use your highlight for other people’s stories, that’s interesting.
I use Grammarly to check my work, it's not perfect but it's the best free spell check i've found.
There's a great Witch series called Salem, on netflix i think, it has some sex scenes and is quite dark. It may give you some inspiration for your...
Separate names with a comma.
