To give some examples of chapter titles: - "I've Wanted You To Choke On My Dick So Long" - Futazilla vs. Biollantitties - Batbreeder V: Bred Men...
While there is a benefit in brevity, there are some considerations: 1) Short, generic titles like "Yes" and "No" tell you nothing about the...
Pace yourself. It's a marathon, not a race.
Stylistically, I think you need to break up some of your dialogue. For example, when you write: All the different speakers are sort of jumbled...
Haven't updated this in a while...just looked at the spreadsheet and as it stands now (likes can always change things), I only need to write 265...
Sounds like Freedom to Fuck.
I generally start out realistic and get progressively more fantastic as the story progresses - but the realism is important. If you start out with...
I'm kind of imagining a scenario where Gina wakes up one day as a middle-aged MILF with a harem of men to serve her every need and utterly...
Sorry for the delay on the reply, could not be helped. But I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review....
First off, decide what the narrative purpose of the sex scene is. Is it just to be hot, or is it meant to introduce how far a character has to go...
I will get the reply to this as soon as I feasibly can, which is not soon because life is suddenly hectic. So...next weekish.
I mean, those could just be branches of LLNO or Bad Sex. Which is the major issue with remaking many CHYOA stories, the premise is usually elastic...
If someone wants to reboot Lois Lane's Night Out or Bad Sex, choosing only the branches they like and expanding on the ideas with better writing,...
That's a good start!
Well, all of my reviews and answer-chapters involve sex, so you want to tag those correctly. For LLNO, I think there was a slight uptick in...
Yeah, the massive-tag-cloud is something I think folks struggle with on broader stories like LLNO. Something for everyone! If you can find it.
I don't know if there's a sweet spot, exactly, but because depth is shown on the front page but total number of chapters isn't, I think deeper...
I'm thinking that around October I should either do a similar follow-up to Bad Sex or a new story with the same basic framework called Good Sex....
I suppose there's always the Splice option where you get sexually assaulted and knocked up by the genetic abomination you engineered.
Sex between related women counts as incest. The tabooness is generally the sexual contact between closely related family members; the possibility...
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