Im probably biased, but your story seems pretty cut and dry as far as incest is concerned. Things become a lot more interesting if there are...
Keep things vague (eg hair color, curvy, thinly built) and focus on key details that others might see in them like a character trait or better yet...
Thinking of maybe writing a story based in the blade runner universe. Honestly, im surprised no one has done it before as we are already given...
Lol, i can imagine it would be hard for the patrons to keep it up after that, not to mention the reputation a place like that would have, or...
Interesting idea. Do the patrons know they're ghosts? Also sexy and ghosts usually dont mix well, unless sometimes when it involves controlling...
If i see an author's name here, how do i find their stories on chyoa? Is there a search function i cant find?
Sure. Does it have an interesting plot?
I wouldnt mind if people pointed things out for me. Sometimes, I dont know how to work my way around some errors and it takes a bit of input to...
Like when I first started, you have random commas where they shouldnt be. Also, don't be afraid to make longer sentences; and for god sakes, use...
To be the first one as far as i know to finish a story. Also get on the first page of my catagory, currently on fourth.
I see what your saying. I do have outright rejection at 2 points in the story. Early on with the cousin and once depending your choices with your...
I think you could do a raped to death scene without crossing the line as long as you arent focused too much on violence or gore. For example...
I would possibly be interested in helping you out with that story. Thing is I would need a clear outline with a definite ending before i decide to...
Care to elaborate on the fantasy creature view? If thats the case that it isnt acceptable then a lot of stories on here are forbidden...
You need less you and your's in that story as it starts sounding more like an aweful transcript of a play than a story set in second person. Also...
Thanks, that helps. Still find it a bit odd for non human characters. Like a tentacle monster or a unicorn or a demon dog doesnt pass the harkness...
I know as a standard for people its 18 plus but what about when im writing about a fantasy world. What are the age guidlines to non human...
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.438500 Thought this would be a nice open side project for me and anyone else to add onto. Basically...
Basically thats what the unconcious male/ female is that you pick up. Theyre a monster in disguise.
what do you mean by rejection in the previous chapters for variety?
Separate names with a comma.
