Keep in mind, the readers aren't going to be as intimately familiar with your characters as you are, so it doesn't hurt for you to use their names...
Well, it's clear you have a vision for the world and an aesthetic for the kind of sexual activity you want to depict; that's all good. You're...
I think all you're leaving out is some of the weird ones, most of which speak to specific fetishes or use props, like: Lick urethra Insert...
Not keen on the nose hooks either, but there are several points in the story where I tried to push myself out of my comfort zone.
Not even the weirdest kink in the story. You know what kind of bizarreness you can get up to in 4100+ chapters? Breast pregnancy. Urethra...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Armpit_fetishism
After a complicated and thorough search, I've discovered that Blaze has not fucked Lois Lane's armpit yet. Makes a note to write that chapter.
Ah yeah. This is the CHYOA content I crave. Vocabulary lessons. (LLNO does have a cuckquean chapter, but getting to that plot point is very...
Well, this is why the edit button exists.
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-%26-Blaze-Read-Marcie-%26-Gina-Read-Lois-Lane%27s-Night-Out-Part-2%3A-Sweet-Revenge.971233 I did debate the title...
If you want a longer path without cheating, you can start at the beginning and just keep clicking the first option all the way down. That's...
I see @Gambio is figuring out that one of the issues with having a massive branching story is that very often, many of the branches are...
Have once or twice; sometimes because I think better of what I wrote, sometimes because I flubbed up some major continuity error.
I hereby opt in for Masochism Mode. Pick a path, any path. Dark gods know there's enough to go around.
exxxidor started it, and a few other folks have chimed in. But Lois Lane's Night Out is 4,152 chapters and I've written 4,115 of them. So...99.1%...
Gambio did a review, so I did a review of the review, and now Gambio is going to do another review...
The reason I'm trying to focus on completing branches is because at the moment there are nearly 400 endings...but there are hundreds more branches...
It's a joke on Lois & Blaze read Marcie & Gina read CHYOA, punning on Star Wars Episode II: The Phantom Menace and Gina's well-known detestation...
Lois & Blaze read Marcie & Gina read CHYOA 2: The Phallus Menace
Chapters written: 4,151 (+76) Chapters to be written (green): 28 (+26) Chapters to be written (orange): 571 (+5) Chapter 20 endings: 393 (+18)...
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