As a matter of writing practice, the more writing you do, the more likely you are to reach a comfortable level of expertise. For people that are...
For a lot of folks, if it's their first story, they might be intimidated or not sure how to get started. For folks starting a new story, some...
Oh believe me, there are SO many more dickgirls. Writing actual lesbian branches is hard as hell; I think almost every one that gets to chapter 20...
Unfortunately, at this rate I don't know when (or if!) the path you originally picked on Lois Lane's Night Out might finish. If you get hard up...
4,000 chapters. Wooo. Still a long way to go...and I might have to adjust my sights on what constitutes "done" on this project, because at the...
Not everybody likes fanfic stories, and not everyone has a specific fandom they're interested in - but is there any particular aspect of fandom...
There are a couple of defloration scenes in Lois Lane's Night Out, although it's very much not the norm and usually involves shenanigans. If you...
I'm not not writing with such an audience in mind, but Lois Lane's Night Out, for all of its non-cis content, isn't being terribly accurate to the...
And also with you.
Do keep in mind the age limits on this site, so all young men should be 18+ for CHYOA.
Chapters written: 3,948 (+156) Chapters to be written (green): 32 (+7) Chapters to be written (orange): 541 (+24) Chapter 20 endings: 352 (+23)...
You might want to fix your link there. The writing and dialogue are overall solid. The plot is fairly linear at the moment, and maybe a touch...
Believe it or not, there was a few days this month when all the green chapters were done and I was working on the orange chapters. Then yesterday...
3,916 chapters strong...and growing! It's a little easier in a game environment because you can use variables to constrain choices and outcomes,...
As someone who is writing a story with lots of branching paths...it does absolutely get out of hand. If you take the original Choose Your Own...
I wanted to highlight this because it's a good example. Helen Parr in the Pixar movies is never going to go to a gloryhole - but she's married,...
I don't know if I'm the best one to talk about this, since I feel my characterization often feels very loose and can turn on the dime according to...
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It's definitely a very solid chapter. If I was going to nitpick, you might consider breaking up that opening paragraph - lots of good detail, but...
Got the second covid shot, feeling funky, and real work is piling up. So chapters are going to be delayed for a day or two.
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