I might go for something a little more subtle, like Survivor: Shirts vs. Skins - enforced nudity on one group to heighten tensions, and allowing...
One of the things about a sex scene is that it doesn't have to involve penetration, and it doesn't have to continue until completion. Humans are...
712 chapters. Not going to be a good week, writing-wise - travel last weekend and travel this coming weekend. But it goes on, and the sitting at...
@BlanqSl8 Well, some basic observations first - The Endangered Gender is a fun concept, you have a fairly strong concept for the world and...
Keeping things fresh is a challenge, and I do often wonder if I'm getting stale - and I think it's probably a good maxim that if I'm bored trying...
Light side and dark side - I usually prefer sex-positive stuff, especially where people choice's makes them end up in sexual situations, but...
There's going to be overlap in a lot of categories - I've got a fan fiction story that has magic, sci fi, transformation, hypnosis, gender...
@geezermcpleezer I touched on a few points earlier in your feedback thread, but I'll try to go into a little more depth - and hopefully a couple...
Still dealing with the fetish-overload thing myself; all I can say is that I like variety and folks that care seriously about...
Using the Kinsey Scale is a nice touch. I'm not sure how "fantastic" you want to take the premise - hypnosis would sort of defeat the point, and...
It's a different premise - and I like sex-positive takes as a nice change of pace from all the rape & impregnation fic.
I like having more options (to present the reader a choice), but it's your story and you should do whatever you're comfortable with, especially if...
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Spirit-Surrogacy.524517 This is one of those chapters I always end up second-guessing on...I know what I want to...
692 chapters. Not as many likes this week, but that's okay. Been making solid progress on sequels to the older 5-like chapters (down from 37 to...
Not as far as I'm concerned. I suppose if it greatly affected chapters written by other people it would be a faux pas, but I go back and tweak...
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