One of the things I've learned over the years is how to deal with writer's block. A lot of it, for me at least, involves getting into the habit of...
I know this might seem strange, but I feel the plot has sort of been slow to develop on the Justice League/Batgirl line, which seems to be your...
This, to be honest. While I like to give readers what they want, if I waited for feedback I would never write anything. The most important thing...
Ah...okay, I misunderstood, when you wrote: I mistook the subject in the second sentence ("He") as "the worm," not Sheogorath.
It's a little short right now to give much feedback. I'm sort of intrigued by the slave wearing a dress (maybe a little more description there?),...
Life intervened, and I haven't written anything in days. But...now returning to our regularly-scheduled smut. For all 5-7 of you that regularly...
...and the 900th chapter is End: Blaze Chooses Lois. Which is rather romantic, in a "please fuck my ass" kind of way. I may yet someday do a dark...
I've had a couple stubborn ideas that didn't go away until I wrote them out, but I've never gone back and re-written anything (maybe I should,...
890 chapters. Good progress this week, with several new ends/and epilogues, including End: Lois Gives Birth to A Cock, End: Lois Wins (maybe my...
Well, first off you've put quite a bit of work into this! No dead ends that I could find, and the mechanics all seem to work. So, congratulations...
Better. It's really about either setting up the next chapter, or framing a decision for readers to make (if you're at a branching point).
Personally, I like to end my chapters with a question - a decision point for where the story might go from here. Sometimes it's presented as a...
While I appreciate that you're doing longer chapters and setting up the narrative that might give some choices for the reader later, "End of Page"...
Well, you've got two very long linear narratives going - with a few shorter side branches. It might be interesting to see the side branches...
This, really. The limitations on the powers are what really help define the choices that the characters make throughout the story. Mind control...
That is, in fact, part of the reason I don't like it!
Texas Hold 'Em is a (currently) very popular form of poker; I hate it. However, I used it in a chapter:...
The mechanical bit is definitely the tricky part. But that isn't a confession... Confessions: - I hate Texas Hold 'Em, and consider it one of...
Chapter count: 872. Surprisingly robust with the likes/bookmarks this week, so not really cutting into the second-option chapters, but continuing...
I might still do bad sex...the original version, which is probably a lot sadder and more unsatisfying...if I finish this story and the one I have...
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