"Velociraptor is my spirit animal, you wouldn't understand." And I was thinking Jennifer in the Tina Turner role. Her park, her rules. :P
Gonna be honest with you, Cretan_Bull. Whatever I was expecting, Heather Raptors jumping Hannah was not it. Everyone shouting and scratching and...
That is strange, but I guess I can see where it would come from, the firstborn son being the heir and so on. Too right. I think that's what makes...
Shit, I wasn't even thinking about the name! Personality-wise, Kate strikes me more like Heather in her smartassness, but hey! Comicbooks love...
It is an ideal setup for anyone who wants to jump in and have their favorite characters just go at it, but since the entire Marvel universe is...
Howdy! I've been enjoying the story so far, I think you've got a fun, brisk writing style. A few (meaning many) things came to mind when I read...
Appreciated, duskford. I was hoping the reader could see how she was able to broach her inhibitions even while the other characters were freaking...
Ah, that makes sense then. I can see how it works out now. I imagine distance isn't a major concern for her, she's probably sprinting to get a...
Forgive the double-post, but it's done. Next orgy thread is posted. It's a more blatantly, shamelessly sexual dare than we've done so far. I hope...
Definitely. I don't mean to take away from anyone else's writing. My thought was that your main threads, the orgy threads, and the erotophilia...
It is a bit of a mess, isn't it? This is duskford's primary storyline: 2.1 They enter the cabin -> 3.4 Let fate decide -> 4.2 Heather ---> 94.1...
Quick orgy update. I'm back home now. Couldn't get much done while I was away, but the bones are all there and now it's just filling in the guts...
“Unconventional maybe, but all the more intriguing because of it.” My thoughts exactly. So, from what Bill says (or doesn't say), the activities...
>> Re: Hannah. Yes, she's aggressive. No question. If we're going to categorize that negatively, I'd say she's careless or impulsive, not...
Found it! Took me a bit, but it's much easier to spot once you zoom in past the default scale. *That* is a nice touch. I hadn't thought about it...
These are fantastic! I think this is the best way of presenting the staff. Let authors come up with the majority of physical details, but provide...
He's your Meagan! I need more time to reply to your post over in Researching Stories, but I like the way you've thought out her dynamic with their...
Don't worry about it, henrytemp. Whenever you've got time you're welcome to jump in. Does anybody mind if I start on the next one? I have an idea...
Maybe I'm jumping to conclusions here, but I love how much you're saying without saying it. Angelica "modelled" for her father once she was of...
Yeah, that's a great catch, johnhoftb. Totally slipped my mind, but it fits just right. Even Taylor has an immediate rapport with Heather. What's...
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