@Zekar Well, first off, kudos on getting a lot written! Takes time and effort, and I think it shows when you look at your latest chapters compared...
@cottoneye Comedy is good! Plenty of fun to be found in sex after all. You've got a couple of things started but not a lot developed so far, so...
@FredWeasleyLives1 General notes to start off with: good length on your chapters, with a nice mix of exposition, description, and dialogue. You...
Pregnancy testing (and related services, such as checking whether someone is ovulating) STI testing (and related services) Cleaning station for...
@FredWeasleyLives1 Could you give us a link to the story or stories you've been working on?
State of the story: 671 chapters. A new End: Orgasmic Birth, and an epilogue to an epilogue, Epilogue: Body Image Issues. Fair number of likes...
You might get a bit more response if you put a link to the story in your post, so we don't have to hunt for it.
Hot take: It's pretty linear at the moment. You have some branches, but no real decision points - every chapter ends with "What's Next?", which is...
Just posted the 650th chapter, which feels like a bit of an accomplishment. Been back on track recently, with a steady two-chapters-a-day...which...
@Kore First things first, I love your enthusiasm, and by extension your characters - it's nice to read some characters that are really...
@JerkGently Well in general formatting all of your stories are long straight narratives with no branching paths. That by itself need not be a bad...
635. Production's down, and gonna be less this week because I have to travel (family shenanigans). On a surprising note, the interracial/big black...
Yes, a very good point.
It is entirely up to you, but insofar as the father is going to be reflecting on the son, certain issues of physical resemblance might come up....
@Lookingforthis It's an unusual premise, and I not clear where you're going with it - well, except back to where Jason came from (ha ha) - but...
@hambo First off, congrats on dedication! 342 chapters and counting is nothing to sneeze at. Some general thoughts to start off: 1) You have some...
628 chapters as of this comment. Was traveling this weekend, so fewer updates than I'd hoped, on top of which there were a lot of likes/bookmarks...
There's multiple examples of it in there. But I for one won't argue if you prefer commas to periods.
Thanks. I've got something different planned if/when this story eventually reaches its natural end.
Up to 616 chapters, including two new chapter 20 endings: End: Anal Whores and End: I Want A Baby (I promise not every ending will have Lois Lane...
Separate names with a comma.
