Slow isn't bad. A bit of plot development, take some time to develop the characters and situations. I'm interested to see where this goes.
If LLNO ever got SotW, I completely missed it. But yeah, I totally understand, different strokes and all that. But there will be some more...
That is, in fact, one of the plans for the branches from the Press The Button chapter. Lois Lane is injected with X-Kryptonite and gains full...
Something for almost everyone. [/edit] And we haven't gotten into paternity yet in the Lex Luthor chapters.
Was kinda hoping the individual posts weren't that bad.
And that's 300 chapters! Granted, most of the paths are only 8-9 chapters deep at this point, but there's something to be said for quantity and...
For a short time after being castrated, sexually mature males can still get an erection and have sex - they just can't ejaculate; this actually...
It's easier than ever before to make some money out of writing porn - Amazon Kindle and Smashwords and similar sites have just made it really easy...
And our first chapter from new writer, wblade, Nods. Which is always one way to speed things up...
You've obviously put a lot of work and effort into it so far, and that shows: the statistics all seem to work, the looping paths and conditional...
Again, a bit of personal taste involved there - I like doing frequent branches because it's a bit of a creative exercise, but the side-effect of...
I think few writers here start a story with an end in mind; like the readers themselves, they may have certain ideas and scenes they want to go...
It's been a bad week for writing; too much other stuff to do. Being a specific fandom, the story doesn't get as many likes as some of the more...
Yeah, there's a couple grammatical errors in there which make it a bit awkward to read in places. You might consider running the chapters through...
Might want to add a link, so folks can find the story easily.
Welcome back! Looking forward to what you've got.
I don't think you need to change the perspective (as you mention, you've already gone this far with it, it would be a pain to change it). Game...
Well, you only have two chapters so far, so maybe I just haven't gotten used to the style.
Well, there's...not much there yet. One chapter deep, more breaking the fourth wall than not, and I'd try to avoid too much violence or you'll run...
Well, you've got a pretty decent main path, but not a lot of branches, and several of those dead end. The writing is fine (first person isn't my...
Separate names with a comma.
