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Definitely something a little tricky, and I'm definitely not an expert on it...but a possible approach is to ask a few questions: 1) Who are the...
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Okay. It's probably going to be a slow corruption, and I'll probably include a couple different variations on it, and given the time it takes me...
Well, it's science fiction, so...you could do some interesting body modifications. Like one of them wakes up with a dick, or a second vagina or...
I'm not familiar with the source material, so that might be affecting things, but nothing much has happened yet. Four chapters, good length, but...
It's not bad. I'm not particularly fond of the short chapters (and I mean the <500 word ones, not just ones that are brief but plot-significant)...
Yellow Fever's not my particular kink, but it seems like a good start along the main path - or at least, I'm curious what your plans are for...
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I like what there is of it, good bit of replayability, the prose is fine. I think the mechanics work well - and I appreciate the fact that you...
A little slow and linear so far, but I'm curious to see where this goes (although yes "cheating spouses" as a category sort of implies where it...
I like it so far. The scenes are neither too short or too long, a good amount of variation in the action. Fair number of dead ends, but that's...
...and with chapter #193, every branch so far goes to 8.1. I know it's taking a while to fill out the different paths instead of plunging ahead...
So, the basic solution I came up with: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Cunthugger.429041 is that the "aliens" are actually biomechanical drones designed...
More a bit of bookkeeping/background than anything else, but I prepared the Kryptonite Guide page, which gives an idea of what the functions of...
So, we're at about 175 chapters and counting for Lois Lane's Night Out - it doesn't look like that much because it's only a max of 9 chapters deep...
Always a good idea to include a link: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.425028 That said...not much there yet. Three chapters, no decisions...
Much the same comments as the other story apply, only I think the game elements are particularly ill-developed at this time - or maybe I'm just...
There's a sizable amount of content, and the writing is a decent mix of plot development and boning. Chapter development is uneven; I get the...
Okay, reply back from one of the admins: So...I write around it, when I get to that. Such is life.
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