I promised to do a Masoschist Mode review for @Iam_DickMan and I will...just breaking it up into 20-30 chapter chunks, because I'm still busy this...
I've been meaning to do a Masochist Mode review, but I've been trying to catch up on LLNO first. Will try to get to it this weekend, if not sooner.
Still playing catchup. 216 days left in 2023, and I need to write more than 1 chapter a day to finish the story...but recent archive binges are...
I've tagged the relevant chapters "illustrated," but I don't have many illustrated branches.
My plans for writing a new story for 2023 fell out the window because of real life stuff, and because I want to finish Lois Lane's Night Out...
To give some examples of chapter titles: - "I've Wanted You To Choke On My Dick So Long" - Futazilla vs. Biollantitties - Batbreeder V: Bred Men...
While there is a benefit in brevity, there are some considerations: 1) Short, generic titles like "Yes" and "No" tell you nothing about the...
Pace yourself. It's a marathon, not a race.
Stylistically, I think you need to break up some of your dialogue. For example, when you write: All the different speakers are sort of jumbled...
Haven't updated this in a while...just looked at the spreadsheet and as it stands now (likes can always change things), I only need to write 265...
Sounds like Freedom to Fuck.
I generally start out realistic and get progressively more fantastic as the story progresses - but the realism is important. If you start out with...
I'm kind of imagining a scenario where Gina wakes up one day as a middle-aged MILF with a harem of men to serve her every need and utterly...
Sorry for the delay on the reply, could not be helped. But I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review....
First off, decide what the narrative purpose of the sex scene is. Is it just to be hot, or is it meant to introduce how far a character has to go...
I will get the reply to this as soon as I feasibly can, which is not soon because life is suddenly hectic. So...next weekish.
I mean, those could just be branches of LLNO or Bad Sex. Which is the major issue with remaking many CHYOA stories, the premise is usually elastic...
If someone wants to reboot Lois Lane's Night Out or Bad Sex, choosing only the branches they like and expanding on the ideas with better writing,...
That's a good start!
Well, all of my reviews and answer-chapters involve sex, so you want to tag those correctly. For LLNO, I think there was a slight uptick in...
Separate names with a comma.
