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My rule of thumb is to only have the dialogue of a single person in a paragraph, because otherwise it becomes annoying to track who's talking at...
It's unfortunate that I add more than 1 like to this post.
Consider reading stories in languages you do understand.
Not exactly high praise. :(
Excessive sexual violence. To my knowledge it's fine if someone gets slapped around a bit, but nothing that would satisfy someone with the...
oh good
I expected this. :P
I'd also say longer. It's the last chapter, so reader who aren't into the subject matter can just ditch it without risking missing out on crucial...
Agreed. Writing is hard enough as it is. Personally, I like to write at least 1 chapter in each branch so that I've got a jumping off point for...
This?
No experience with it myself, but I imagine it's the same as other erotic art: make a Twitter account, post sneak previews, and offer commissions....
Merry Christmas <3
You can't find that option because it doesn't exist. ;) A mod can do it for you, I believe.
Nice! Me too!
Skill (of any kind) is not really skill. It is practice. [ATTACH] (Source) Given the length and level of detail of your synopsis, I'd say you've...
Once You Go Terran, You Never Go Back: a Protoss person discovers how good oral is when they hook up with a Terran for the first time.
I also do this! It works really well, highly recommended.
But also maybe people should read the literal last post in the thread before posting a question answered by exactly that post.
Ah, fair enough.
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