A new story only stays on the new story list for so long. If the first impression people get of it is ONE chapter, and it doesn't change the...
Because the proofreader just gives up after "Blade" "Silencer" and "Darkness"
More than welcome, and NO pressure whatsoever to read... I KNOW how long winded I am. :P (Mostly just added a lot of endings) I grew up in the...
Sounds like a good plan. I'm lucky that I have an audience who will listen to my smut... so I read it aloud and I concur... hearing it makes it...
Heh... first thought when reading the opening was "The Good, The Bad, And the Ugly"... in that it felt like a European product. For some reason,...
Well, of course NOW, I'm going to use the opening to reference my own Poly Romance Novel with way too much weirdness... And crazy coincidences....
Definitely Fixable, If I may be so bold as to make a suggestion, create a separate "Character Bible/File" on the main page, Copy/Pasta the dump...
Ok... I'll give the honest opinion, because I hope that's what you want. I... am a little put off by the exposition dump at the start. Normally...
Well, been a while, but Like Bomber command is up and running again. Today's Target was "The Lord's Companion", a rather fun and elegant work...
You put A LOT of work into this. You're really achieving immersion, and I get a real sense that there's a world outside of just the characters,...
Yeah, that's how I ended up having to do it. Copy/pasta the chapters into another program, and... word count. Takes a LONG time, but at least...
I'd honestly put it under SF, because of the setting. Especially if you were going to include the classic spy story Mad scientist bondage...
And Don't Worry... Dougas Adams was QUITE sure that nobody would bother the gentleman named "Hotblack Desatio" when he stole his name for the lead...
Absolutely agreed. People should write the story they want to read. For some that's the MC story with the dude in High School, but with...
Uhm... do you actually READ what you post before you post it? Try it some time because... uh... word vomit... yeah... uh... yeah, see you...
Tut tut... Straw men are SOOO out of season my dear man. And lay off the broken wing crap combined with platitudes and pedantics. All of which...
I wouldn't worry about it. Could be worse, just ask the Folks who wrote "Archer". [MEDIA]
If were me... If I'm positing this question in that manner, it means that SOMEONE in the story is asking it. The answer is not necessarily the...
Foul! No Rhetoric! Those are the rules that I just made up! Besides... Do you have An Avatar? No Avatar, No Argument! Those are ALSO the...
Heh. Reminds me that I still want to write a Ghostbusters Crossover Fanfic where GB2016 is directed by anybody OTHER than Paul Feig... And stars...
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