In a bit of weirdness, I might have just written the first full path where Lois Lane does not get fucked. I'm not entirely sure because at 625...
Not every story has an end. There has to be room to experiment, to play, or there's no growth.
A small-town <insert gender here> goes to a big city college...and accidentally ends up getting their laundry mixed up with someone else's at the...
The writing isn't bad! I'm not sure if much more could be done with a time loop in this context, unless you include alternate paths to break out...
If you want to write it, write it. It is better to write what interests you, what you're engaged in, than to try and follow what you think should...
Not a line I ever thought I'd read in a CHYOA story, but worth a chuckle. The writing is fine; mostly correct from a technical standpoint (except...
Trying to keep on schedule, but it's hard to focus on writing porn with *waves at everything.*
MILFs are totally a kink. The thing about any story is that it has to be more than just a kink. It's like an action movie needs to be more than...
It is hard to muster the muse of erotic prose when the world's gone to hell.
I don't normally like to bitch about formatting and the like, but the way you go back-and-forth on punctuation styles (sometimes using apostrophes...
If I had a recommendation for how to improve it, I would suggest a stronger focus on the pacing. The one-minute-blowjob is a good idea, but it's...
I thought that as well. Sort of like with Gambio's review story but less meta. That being said, not sure which CHYOA stories I'd actually want to...
Depends on the execution. If somebody wants the Black Cat (Marvel) to have a lesbian oil wrestling match with Catwoman (DC), it could be great or...
Bookmark counter would at least help me out with the bookkeeping! I have a spreadsheet to help me keep track of things.
Thanks! Yeah, generic-title-choice-decision-making is a real struggle - doesn't exactly draw readers in, and makes it very difficult to find the...
So...with Lois Lane's Night Out, there are a lot of chapters. Like thousands. Nobody is going to read every branch, and some branches just for...
Heh. Makes me wonder if we should start a new thread where we post our best, least-loved chapters.
Chapters written: 5,100 (+100) Chapters to be written (green): 17 (+0) Chapters to be written (orange): 741 (+10) Chapter 20 endings: 606 (+32)...
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