Speaking for myself...if you don't feel the sex scene, then focus on what the people feel, emotionally; what they're thinking, how this fits into...
Behold the example of SuperStories.net. It's an ancient url - and if you go back to the Internet Archive, you can pull up pages going back to...
Nah. Normal human beings are terrible at that some of thing.
Speaking just for myself...I struggle with dirty talk. Dialogue itself flows fine, I think, but trying to do dirty talk always seems to come...
Plus, it allows extended butt-plug related metaphors and meta-jokes.
Did they? Missed that. Also, Lois Lane's Night Out is now thirty-two chapters deep. For anyone that wants the challenge of finding, reading, and...
Going to try and do a couple more Masochist Mode entries this weekend...which, I think, is mostly down to Unknown7's Lindsey Shepard and Gambio's...
Had over 300 notifications when I woke up this morning, so all of those numbers above are now slightly pointless.
Chapters written: 4,245 (+94) Chapters to be written (green): 55 (+27) Chapters to be written (orange): 590 (+19) Chapter 20 endings: 411 (+18)...
Gotta have my fun.
@AlexandraS90 https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"King-Edward"-by-AlexandraS90.984725 Also @Unknown7...
Dislikes would just be used by people to troll authors/stories/categories they don't like. I don't think it would add anything.
Oof! You've put a lot of work into this. I haven't read through every chapter, but I don't find any real issues with your prose. You manage to...
Yes, you should make it explicit. Any child characters should be clearly aged-up, physically and mentally, and for teens the big thing is to make...
One for @BBBlooster https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-%26-Blaze-read-%22Naive-And-Erotic-Roommates%22-by-BBBlooster.981633
And knowing is half the battle.
I was maybe a little harsh on @Unknown7 in "Dark Lord." If I do a follow-up, I'll take the more developed path....
Whichever you prefer. I'd like to do more with Masochist Mode this weekend, as other writing allows.
Just try and fucking stop me!
I can't throw any stones when it comes to "branching extremely rapidly," though the way our stories are set up is very different. If/when I ever...
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